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Alternate Title: The Snake Goes Ara Ara

By cruel trick of the fates, intervention of stupid gods, or just the apathy of an uncaring universe I find myself woken up as Orochimaru just after he had possessed a woman for his new host. Now I need to find a way to turn this hoard of sycophants and psychos into something that will not only keep me from an early grave, but also how to change it to a force of change in this messed up world.

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WhoaMama

WhoaMama

Crafter of puns, guilder of innuendo

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hakatri gin
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A fanfic that is big on doing its own thing

Reviewed at: Chapter 34

This series does something thats the biggest strength of fanfics: it makes its own story by developing the secondarycharacters

Instead of directly invading the main characters, the MC does a lot of preparations in what would be the background of the main plot, and in doing to injects a lot of personality to the c-list characters

Most importantly, every character keeps their original personality, so it totally feels as if im reading Naruto, and this fidelity to the original seting allows for any chages made by the MC to have plenty of weight, as her main goal is to prevent the bad stuff by interacting with others, instead of directly becoming OP and solving everything, as fanfics tend to do

Is like how Naruto had Sasuke to move the other side of the story, now Orochitama adds a third party

 

LonelyVigil
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This Is Really FUN!!!

Reviewed at: Chapter 33

Jumping in as Orochimaru is genius I haven't seen yet. The story is really fun just with the main character's charisma alone. After reading the frist ark it really showed this story's potential so if nothing at least read that and have a laugh, stay if you like or don't after that. Gave a advanced Five Stars to help the algorithm or whatnot, a realistic 4 Star so far over all.

I do have a minor critique from what I've read so far. It feels like the author doesn't know how dark they want the world to be. (See spoiler below 👇)

You have this protagonist who is striving to build a hidden village with 21st century morals. Carrying the identity, emotional baggage and life experience of one of the most prolific and indifferent slaughters in the ninja world.

BUT, there are times where certain character interactions or even points of planning should be darker/more pragmatic to ground the story with the protagonist and world setting we have. I mean the Shinobi world is a place that deals death left and right as easy as people breathe in and out. So the character's currently "peaceful" approach simply cannot last and/or should be adjusted.

The character is just a bit too optimistic about how they deal with things. It leads me to question, will they end up paying for this by suffering a loss later on?? Will Author-nim address this by evolving the character into a dangerous but reliable leader that protects her village later vs the current smart funny fluff ball milf with spikes they are now. Or what? I'm not sure.

It wouldn't be a problem if this was pure light comedy. But it isn't. And I wouldn't enjoy it as much as I do if it were.

I look forward to the next chapter Author-nim. We are WAITING!! ☺️

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Galmando
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Reading with a huge grin

Reviewed at: Chapter 5

Orochimama might be the most fun body swap story I've ever read. I've read ahead some on other sites, and I can say without any doubt that Orochimama is a must-read for anyone with even a hint of interest in Naruto fanfiction. It's the subversion of a villain done in one of the best ways possible.

Heartsy
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Just read it, you will not regret it!

Reviewed at: Chapter 33

This story is fantastic. It's just the right amount of light hearted humor, with enough serious tones to keep it grounded. The characters are likable, the cast has good chemistry, and the plot actually feels like it's going somewhere. We still have a ways to go, but all things considered the story has been a great ride so far and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes in the future. 

9/10 would highly recommend it.

scorpia95
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This is actually really good and hilarious. 

Initially I ended up putting it off because the title was pretty weird, but I wish I'd gotten to it sooner. I really loved the story. I'm not a huge naruto fan and had to google every time a new character appeared. I do hope the author continues with this.

UndeadReader
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Hilarious naruto fanfic

Reviewed at: Chapter 30

This is an amazing peice of work, so great, I ignored the occasional mistakes in grammar or wording when giving it five stars.

It's... well this author seems like someone who has been writing for years. Writing successful novels, that is. 

 

Gal, if you took the time to write an original story, you might find yourself with more money and time. How many good stories actually have a promiscuous bi woman as the main character anyways? I'm sure at this point in time you'll have hundreds of thousands across the world lapping it up. 

Gustavo MON
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This is a naruto fanfic and a very well written one ate that, while at first sight the premise might sound insane, orochimaru becoming a lewd ara-ara milf, it isn’t a smut, and the characters are considered with care and well worked.

Its fantastic for a binge reading, which was what I did, there’s multiple pov's in the story, and one of the most entertaining things about it is seeing the reactions from the well known cast from naruto towards such an oddity.

I really look forward to seeing where Whoamama will take the naruto world in this fic.

Style: its third person point of view, very standard and well done, nothing to complain or that jumped up to me.

Story: a muddle aged woman ends up gobbling up orochimarus soul, taking over his body from very early in the naruto story, then we get to see what she gets up to and how that changes the story

Grammar: nothing too distracting besides a few typos.

Characters: possible the best part, besides the interesting position that is orochimaru's the other characters are written in line with their oc personas and their responses to orochitama are very entertaining

Hyperion915
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Dommy mommy orochimaru

Reviewed at: Chapter 29

It's well written. Now go read it just based on the premise, I know you want to lol. But yeah, the story is good, the characters are fun, it's kinda op Mc but in a fun way, and it's well thought out. Not much else to say, it does go a little hard in on the shock value for the characters is perhaps the only thing, but once the characters get used to it I can see this going in a good direction. And it's still good now, just that every chapter so far has been people getting used to tama

Forsaken123
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This fanfiction, is more than one could ever expect.  Comedy, seriousness and choas, an interesting protag and characters to Root for. (Hehhe) 

Shame that are not more chapers, this might be the best fanfiction on this website. 

 

Orochi! Is such an interesting woman. I wonder what she will do next, and more importantly how it will affect the rest of the ninja world.

 

mitkopom
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I started reading this novel and up to chapter 4 nothing made sense to me until i finally found out it is a fanfiction of naruto. This work heavy implies that the reader must have read it in order to get whats going on.  Unfortunatelly i have to drop it as worldbuilding isnt done at all as it rellies on prebuilt world of naruto.

I give it 4.5 star, but only because RR demands it in order to post this review. I hardly can make assesment of novels quality:

PS: I do reccomend that autor should put "naruto fanfic" in the description.