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Alternate Title: The Snake Goes Ara Ara

By cruel trick of the fates, intervention of stupid gods, or just the apathy of an uncaring universe I find myself woken up as Orochimaru just after he had possessed a woman for his new host. Now I need to find a way to turn this hoard of sycophants and psychos into something that will not only keep me from an early grave, but also how to change it to a force of change in this messed up world.

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WhoaMama

Crafter of puns, guilder of innuendo

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Sininenblue
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I don't/didn't watch Naruto nor have I ever had much of an interest for the show.

But this is good, really good. Not good fanfiction good, just a generally well written book kind of good.

The characters and the world are well fleshed out, and though I can't speak for how much of that is from the show itself, the fact that it's written this way is still a huge plus. It's actually funny, lots of nose exhales on this one. And I just find it enjoyable enough that I lost some sleep over it.

I still can't pin down what specific quality of a book makes it so enganging, but this one has that in spades and you should read it.

 

I think the only thing that I would like for this story to add is a link to the characters wiki page or something because I have no idea who these people are. Most of the time it doesn't really matter since you can pick it up through context clues and just treat it like an in media res type story. But it would be nice, though that doesn't actually have anything to do with the quality of the story.

 

GLM
Overall

Bad-touch-pedo-snake-man is now a prosmiscuous busty lady, mayhem ensues and everyone involved proceeds to have a stroke.

Its pretty good, better than it has any right to be, well written and incredibly entertaining, haven't laughed this hard in quite a while.

A few minor grammer issues here and there but nothing too bothersome.

Defintively give this a try if you read/watched Naruto.

 

Btralox
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This fic could have easily become a power stomping SI wankfest but it manages to not be that. It has a bizarre premise but the characters in the setting regard it that way too. Seeing others reactions and theories has been what makes this story shine. All the characters feel real and with good logic that just doesn't understand the out of context problem that is the main character.

The MC also uses the flirting of the main character both for humor and strategically. Many times you can see plainly how the "Ara ara act" is an attempt to make people unbalanced and is absolutely a strategy of the MC. 

Overall, really great. There is the occasional missed word, but otherwise grammar is good. I reccomend for certain you don't let this slip by if you are even vaguely aware of the Naruto series.

 

ThePolarBear
Overall

FanFiction meets good writing and interesting plot

Reviewed at: Chapter 23

The title says it all, i normally hate fanfiction stories, because digging through the heaping pile of flaming garbage to find something actually good is way more work then i want. 

But this, this is golden. The story is hilarous, the characters even though they're all familiar are funny, the writing is actually good, all in all solid funny story that i can't wait for more! 

SpaghettiWerfer
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A very great strange story and awful mental images

Reviewed at: Chapter 13

The Author got evil pedo snake man, Isekai'ed & genderbent him, and we get Orochimama.

It's as weird as it sounds, but the author puts in effort to make this more than a "ha ha, X evil character is now good, watch shenanigans"

Author is REALLY worldbuilding.

The Naruto manga isnt just a setting for this novel, its the world of this novel. You really feel that Orichimama is actually interacting organically with people, and changing things accidentally or purposefully in the timeline. Nothing really feels forced, no Deus Ex Machina.

The characters feel like people, not just excuses for "X shenanigan or Y funny reaction"

So far, this feels like it's own novel, and not a fanfic, as everything flows well, cause and effect is well in place, and the Author really puts in that time to make the story immersive.

Also we get to see Orichimaru drop innuendos, flirt and go "ara ara" , in addition to hilariously terrorizing Kakashi, and trying her level best to stop her subordinates from committing constant crimes against humanity.

Hilarious, believable, and the Author's style is honestly great.

Go read, you will like it a lot more than you think it will. 

 

 

 

GGitsDonnel
Overall

Best fanfiction I've ever read

Reviewed at: Chapter 31

As someone who has watched an unhelathy amount of Naruto, I can honestly say I enjoy this version of events far more than the offical one.

Orochimaru was one of my least favourite characters in the show, but had Orochimama replaced him, she would have been my favourite!

This story is very well written and the author has done a great job of keeping true to the world Masashi Kishimoto created. By making only subtle changes, as Orichimama's actions and words cause small ripples, the story remains close enough to the original to keep you on the edge of your seat, while being different enough to keep the reader engaged.

Featuring some (or many) of your favourite characters the author makes small chages to the original story, so that many side characters, who didn't get much time in the original, are now front and centre. This change in perspective and increased relevance of previously minor characters makes the story feel fresh and new ... something that says a lot about the authors ability when that story has as much content as Naruto!

Overall a thoroughly enjoyable read for someone who's enjoyed (some of) the original Naruto story!

And even if you nothing about the original, this version is certainly worth a try!

Shernum
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Humorous and Enjoyable

Reviewed at: Chapter 24

This is an extremely entertaining fan fiction. I started reading this when it showed up on the rising stars page, which I trawl for content every once in a while. I binged the entire story in one night, and am eagerly awaiting more.

The style is excellent. I'm really not entirely sure why, but I really enjoy reading the chapters on a level separate from the content. It flows and moves along at a very comfortable pace that appeals to me.

The story is probably the best part of this fic. The world of Naruto is realized in exacting detail, with the ripples from the MCs actions being clear and easily followed, and almost always hilarious. Seeing the way that the plot continues to develop in surprising and interesting ways kept me reading even when I really should have gone to bed.

The grammar is, for the most part, quite good, but some errors do manage to slip through. I would recommend letting patreon readers proofread a day or two before the chapters go live publicly.

The characters are, except for the MC, lifted straight from Naruto. I've never read or watched Naruto, so I can't say how accurate they are to their counterparts, but they feel like fleshed out and real people in this story. The reactions to the MCs are the driving force of the story, and seeing how the many characters react to her in their own unique ways that make sense with their character, is always enjoyable.

In summary, this is a very enjoyable fiction, and I highly recommend it.

starportDOTseth
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I read this on another site already but couldnt help but reread it here when i saw it. It is very good. The si/oc fuses with orichimaru gaining all of their power, memories, and reputation. This is both a blessing and a curse. Its difficult to use metaknowledge to save the day when everyone thinks you are a traitor with zero morals, so a rebrand is in order and hilarity ensues. 

Jemdins
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At first, i thought this was going to be some sort of lewd crack-fic, only to have any and all expectations broken and now i'm looking foward to chapter uptades.

The protagonist is interesting too, compared to the more... mediocre template most fan-fictions use i'm looking foward to the new life(?) that she'll have, spreading chaos everywhere, getting drunk, committing war crimes, cooking, and all the details in between.

Very well written too, character interacton is glorious, not cringe, consistent worldbuilding, good grammar (idk i didn't spot any mistakes), i can't predict what's going to happen next, and even when i do know, i look foward to see what happens along with character reactions and the inpact that her actions have in the world.

coinhas2sides
Overall

Great story idea, comes from an angle many have considered but often either go down the super villain path or too altruistic or idealized. 

This story has a nice balance and takes the time to flesh out the beginning and interactions.

Looks at multiple povs to see the reaction from other side which is very entertaining 

Hope you continue