My Werewolf System

My Werewolf System

by Kawin Sherwin

Warning This fiction contains:
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What would you do if you were to wake up one day to the message?
[You have 5 days until the next full moon]
[Your bloodlust is increasing]

Gary Dem is a person with a secret. While coming back to school appearing as a whole new person, he does everything he can to keep this from the people he cares about. For his path is one that led him to become part of the underworld.

The world has changed, and gangs rule the streets sponsoring big corporations. Bribing politicians behind the scenes and controlling the decisions people make without them knowing it. Using a new breed of humans called the Altered, a mixture of man and beast.

It was only meant to be a side job, he was never meant to dig in too deep, but on a mission for his gang, something went wrong, something changed him.

[You have 5 days until the next full moon]
[Your bloodlust is increasing]

The lone wolf... is about to go on a hunt!

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: An Obsession ago
Chapter 2: The Game Of Rugby ago
Chapter 3: The Underdogs ago
Chapter 4: The System ago
Chapter 5: What Am I? ago
Chapter 6: Werewolf ago
Chapter 7: White Rose ago
Chapter 8: Fight back! ago
Chapter 9: My Heart Beat ago
Chapter 10: How to make money? (Part 1) ago
Chapter 11: How to make Money? (Part 2) ago
Chapter 12: The girl of your dreams ago
Chapter 13: The Gym ago
Chapter 14: Curious Tom ago
Chapter 15: Top Dog ago
Chapter 16: Green Fang ago
Chapter 17: Round 1 ago
Chapter 18: Round 2 ago
Chapter: 19 BPM Rising ago
Chapter 20: He Did What? ago
Chapter 21: Rabid Dog ago
Chapter 22: Charging Heart ago
Chapter 23: The Test ago
Chapter 24: Red Sick ago
Chapter 25: The Truth ago
Chapter 26: A Bond ago
Chapter 27: Forced Bond ago
Chapter 28: Eton High ago
Chapter 29: Surrounded ago
Chapter 30 + 31: Here to Fight! (Correct Chapter) ago
Chapter 32: Lover boy ago
Chapter 33: Xin’s skills ago
Chapter 34: Altered Hunter ago
Chapter 35: The new world ago
Chapter 36 + 37 : A Leader ago
Chapter 38: The power of the moon ago
Chapter 39: Breaking news ago
Chapter 40: Omega Wolf ago
Chapter 41: Omega Beta Alpha ago
Chapter 42: An Unusual gift ago
Chapter 43: Crossed the line! ago
Chapter 44: A.I.F ago
Chapter 45: Boiling point ago
Chapter 46: Anger ago
Chapter 47: Follow the mist ago
Chapter 48: Don't fight! ago
Chapter 49: Grey Elephants ago
Chapter 50: The letter ago
Chapter 51: Just in time ago
Chapter 52: Illegal weapons ago
Chapter 53: Survive! ago
Chapter 54: Targeted ago
Chapter 55: New Skill ago
Chapter 56: Billy's targets ago
Chapter 57: Get him, before me! ago
Chapter 58: Low on Energy ago
Chapter 59: First kill ago
Chapter 60: The hunting Target ago
Chapter 61: A Deal ago
Chapter 62: Kill again ago

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Someone recently wrote a review of this story calling it out for plagiarism, but I've done a little digging and I don't think it lines up.
You can come to your own conclusions, I don't have any hard evidence that it's not just some particularly detailed pirate.

Kawin Sherwin (the name of the account the story was posted under) is JKSmanga's IRL name, it says so on the about page of his website. 
Uploading My Werewolf System on RR wouldn't be a breach of JKSmanga's contract with Webnovel, because he released it non exclusively. You can find him saying this on the top comment of My Werewolf System on Webnovel (I'd link, but RR deletes links in reviews now apparently).
He's even shilling the author's own real patreon. Why the hell would someone do that if they aren't the real author?
Also, I'm pretty sure RR manually reviews new fictions and actively filters out plagarism, they require proof of ownership for reposted stories. 


With that out of the way, below is my actual review.

Style&Grammar:
The book has this light novel style with poor sentence composition. There aren't that many misspelled words but you'll see other minor grammatical errors littered throughout if you look. The author often writes figures of speech which just don't make any sense. E.g. "Instead of melons, they were the size of watermelons." like, what?
There's also telling instead of showing, like a lot of telling, usually random and unrelated. One detail I do like how the his heartbeat can do a lot of implying, that's a good stylistic element. 

Characters: 
The main character is both childish and stupid, he's sixteen in the story but he acts like he's twelve, he does have a sort of infectious energy about him though. He is genuinely heroic with decent motivations.
I was bombarded with so many names in the first couple chapters and so little personality for any of them that I can only remember two side characters, and I couldn't tell you either of their names.

Story:
The story is actually alright. I am sort of interested to see how he's going to cope with the whole werewolf situation while keeping it a secret.


Overall, I'm going to drop this story after reading only enough to make this review.
You might give it a try though, if you're alright with some heavier suspension of disbelief and the light novel style. Personally, those elements are some of my biggest pet peeves, so I can't give it more than 3.5 stars.

(this review has gone through a couple minors edits for grammar and fixes)

spiderkingvvi
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It's a good story with a interesting system I'm interested on what will happen with the heart rate will he go hulk when it gets to high can't wait to find out the grammer is good is at the the beginning I dident realise he was the main charter other than that 10/10