Hegemon of Another World

Hegemon of Another World

by DHEERAJ G

A doctor transmigrates into a world of magic. Devoid of modern technology but not of mysteries beyond science. Follow Ronan as he uses modern knowledge to his advantage and masters the magic to become the Hegemon of Another World. 

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The author is setting up a large world. It's just starting, but the story is flowing nicely. Magic and modern knowledge is exciting concept. I am invested in how he will develop the story.

I am not sure about it, but the story could be focused on kingdom/faction building using magic and modern technology. The author is steadily introducing new characters and ideas. Hopefully, more on that soon. 

The magic system is being introduced step by step in a natural fashion. Our protagonist has no idea about it and slowly learns about magic as the story advances. 

One thing I noticed is the change of setting. The protagonist plans for his future based on his knowledge and rapid changes force him to abandon his plans, but he quickly adapts. Also, we do not have an arrogant/super genius who just knows everything. 

The grammar is not perfect but has no major problems. Everything else is good. The character development could be better, but it is too early to judge.

It is the author's first attempt at writing, so I will update my review after a while.

Give it a chance if you like magic, kingdom building, modern knowledge, and obviously action.