Immortal Soul

Immortal Soul

by Mike777ac

Michael has been around a long time, a very long time. He has been reincarnated more times than he can possibly remember, and picked up a few tricks along the way. Intimately knowing Heaven, Hell, and pretty much everything in between, he was born into a fantasy world. Will he have a long happy life, or a disappointingly short and painful one? Either way, at least it should be entertaining.

[Warning: Contains graphic violence, nudity, mature content, some sexual content (In the later volumes), and relatively dark or crude humor!]

[Disclaimer: This is a fairly long story, and covers many controversial topics. It is almost entirely written in first person past perspective, and from multiple point of views. There are several """"Main"""" characters, and each of them is significant to the plot.]

Related fiction => """"Questing"""" Link => https://mike777ac.wordpress.com/questing/
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akitobdb
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i really like this OVERALL 5/5 dunno what else to say oh right some crit would be good... if i had to point something it was back when you threw that capitalism ideology thingy but meh easily ignored love your 2 laws haha

landann07
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One of my favorite stories. Love the characters, the lengthy chapters, and the very few grammatical errors.

knighthalo123
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Can't wait for more! This is really good. Really enjoying Michael's various genocides and massacres. Seriously, he is OP as hell.

xrsxj
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A remarkable unique story, that beats out tons of professional works out there.  I eagerly await the new chapters.....  Keep it coming Mike777ac.  I can't get enough!

DoktorPrimat
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By the power of The Empire! Read this!

I must say that this story is one of the best I have ever read. It is thought out and well written. The author clearly knows where to go with the story, which I for once don’t. Many times stories have “Predictable” plots. Well this one doesn’t. And it is absolutely amazing! The weirdness in this story is top-noch for all of you (even if you don’t admit it – you know it…..) So penguins! By the power that hopefully will be invested in me, READ! THIS! STORY!

*Big applause from fellow penguins*

 

-Dok

All hail the Penguin Empire!

neurocomia
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a very good story that is so unique I haven't found any similar stories yet. and even though it is a bit long it is definitely worth it

Jamerax
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Crazy good with a dash of underline OP

It's honestly difficult to say anything bad about this. The chapters are long and well organized and the overall story quality and originality is excellent. honestly this is a novel, just not a finished one lol. I'll continue to read and enjoy this until it ends.

the only things I personally found slightly confusing while reading this were the constant and sometimes crazy changes made to the characters throughout the story... it kind of got to a point for me where I forgot exactly what the MC looked like exactly lol. Also there seemed to be times when the story kind of deviated a bit far from the main plot, but nothing too serious and the chapters were still entertaining. 

Maybe I'm just thinking about it too much, meh.

Treyon
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Good but quite confusing

I just finished read up to chapter 20 Archmage part 11. Its been a fun read and there are at least 5 points of view and adventures of the cast of characters where the principal main character is michael and the other main character are the rae, ethir, the rat girl, etc...

The confusing part is that it could be actually possible for your mother AND father to actually be yourself LOL

mazesx
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The pace is perfect, all characters are interesting, and many others good aspects that just make this story awesome.

Better than many commercial light novels.

JUST .THE .BEST

thanks Mike! keep the good work

hintox
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I absolutely love this FF. Please never end this series!!