[Warning: Contains graphic violence, nudity, mature content, some sexual content (In the later volumes), and relatively dark or crude humor!]
[Disclaimer: This is a fairly long story, and covers many controversial topics. It is almost entirely written in first person past perspective, and from multiple point of views. There are several """"Main"""" characters, and each of them is significant to the plot.]
Related fiction => """"Questing"""" Link => https://mike777ac.wordpress.com/questing/
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The story is good so far but i think u should create the map of the story take pace or the whole continent or planet like this one http://puu.sh/ahpwi/cf7fd660ca.png its from LMS n it will make ur story became more intresting cuz the reader know the place where the MC go to adventure or something. well usually u need time to make those map exactly look like what in ur mind n after that try to make pic for the char n the like .
EDIT: Thanks now we(reader) know where the story take place :D u deserve 5 stars
grammar, and in general pretty damn well written
The whole structure, the whole story.
It's confusing and unfocused. Takes too many directions at once. Too many characters, that warp and change personality or reactions to suit the ever changing whims of the author.
Gets boring very quickly at act 2, and easily dropped.
Flow and structure, hope the next work will make use of the lessons learned here.
This is an amazingly well-written story with a lot of depth. Definitely not for the faint of heart or stomach, but I've truly enjoyed this story. It develops at the perfect rate for the characters, and the interconnection of actions is flawless. Thank you for this story, Mike.
Long chapters, no spelling errors, great characters and story, awesome fight scenes, what more could you ask for?
MC is seriously too OP and bad mouthed. Other characters are not well defined but the plot is interesting. Improvements both in writing and characterization with every chapter gives hope that the story down the line would be more engaging.
when i was reading you story sometimes you story rhyme it's actually pretty funny since i didn't expect that, and now my mind won't stop correcting the rhyming the word i read,
You did a great job in building the whole background of each charcter, to the point where we actually get attached even to secondary ones and can't wait to know what will happen to them. Good Job and Thank You.
I just started reading this last night, and I've already finished reading all the currently uploaded chapters. And I seriously can't get enough! Thank you very much for writing this story; This was a very enjoyable read so far, and I can't wait to read the rest of what you have in store for us!
Coming on and finding a new chapter is just so wonderful!
I just can't get enough!