Immortal Soul

I originally thought this story was a 5/5. But after switching to another pov for a few long chs, The story loses its luster and feels like you’re like you’re reading a long filler. The worst part is that at some point, you start to feel disconnected with the mc. More importantly, the story starts to feel like an informative essay about an mc that’s already lived his current life and is just recounting what happened. The author is a really good writer though. He/she just needs to learn to give up a little control of her story and leave it to the reader’s imagination. The reader doesn’t need to know everything that goes on when the mc is not present. It would have been better to hold on to that information to surprise the reader later on. There are a lot of times where you’ll be reading and ask yourself, “Did I really need to know this?” Superfluous details abound within this fiction, which is a double-edged sword in this case. All in all, I would still recommend everyone to read this. Unique story and relationships between characters are what kept me reading personally. The funny thing is ,among the superfluous information, a lot of key explanations are missing. This wouldn’t be a bad thing, but because its so far along and written in first person, it really irritates you that certain characters haven’t been explained yet. Rant over! have fun reading!

Its a fun read with practicly limitless posibilities!

The world and the mechanics of how it works are described beutifully!

I love the Fanfic, and hope to see many more Chapters of it, if it stops, i hereby pronounce i shall cry and wear black for a month straight as a mourning ritual!

So keep up the good work, and thanks for writing!

From a Shancy Fan!

This is one of my favourites on this site, because It’s so well written and original too! My only complaint is that it’s not in the top 5 which isn’t even Mike’s fault  :(. THIS SHOULD AT LEAST BE IN THE TOP 5. Anyway this fiction is so good that I was recommending it to my brother 30seconds in.

Bit too complicated and chaotic for my taste. It starts good but then it becomes chaotic with seemingly random events happening all over. Although mc is supposed to be who knows how old soul it feel like he never has edge on any opponent and pretty much every chapter he's bisected some way. Also its like things just suddenly happen out of nowhere constantly to mc and he has no control over anything.

I'd say this is well written good novel aside from fact that major event seems to happen constantly without much prep story. 

But not for me, somehow causes irritation which I'm reminded all the time because it seems all the characters are feeling like me :D

Another Reincarnation genre, but definitely not just any another Reincarnation story. 

So far, my only complaint is MORE, but since you update regularly with gigantic chapters at that, I have to give my salute.

This deserves five stars, and a moon. Just stars are not bright enough.

Eagerly anticipating for MORE!!!