El sistema samsara [Spanish]

El sistema samsara [Spanish]

by ChicoPubertoN23

Cuando mori,espero que fuera el final,ya sabes,un negro infinito por el resto de la eternidad.

y definitivamente no esperaba que ese no fuera el final.

Si no el comienzo de muchos comienzos.

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