The Soul Princess

by petitben14

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First, sorry if you have difficulties reading my fiction. I am not that good in English but I want to make better English for you guy. The general idea is here.If you have ideas of a way to help me I would like to know them. Thank you for your understanding. Did you imagine if your father is death and you have special powers? I imagined it. I want to tell you that some characters are inspired or pick of the video game Diablo 3 the reaper of souls. There gonna be references to it. Probably nephalems.In the story, the main protagonist wants to know why she different from others. she will also search for her father and her mom. during her adventures, she will find some monster who wants to kill her. example: Leoric the crazy king. also, archangel and demons want her power to protect the world or destroy it. Who will be the one who controls's her? Why archangels and demons are afraid of nephalems and her? So many questions.

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I just want to put this out there; I have not read your book yet. The idea seems great however, Your spelling is a big turn off. In just the summary I've spotted countless mistakes that I suggest you fix if you want readers to give your book a shot.