Former Undead Transmigrated to become Villainess's Butler

Former Undead Transmigrated to become Villainess's Butler

by Semi-Analogue

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Bored of his monotonous life, one undead discovered transmigration magic, and hopped across various worlds until he stumbled on the human realm and lived up to the twenty first century. His dissatisfaction with the role of villainess in the Otome games forced him to take a drastic step and transmigrate into another world of kingdoms and empires, and perhaps the unnatural harem of the heroine. Nurturing the pitiful villainess into a formidable villainess in his goal, and he decides to achieve it without magic. But everything proves to be challenging when he discovers insane magicians in the world, and ravaging monsters that might force him to remove his self-imposed handicap.

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Wyverius
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Excellent to binge, and well worth it

Reviewed at: Chapter 23

In my opinion, this story is pretty good overall. The style is fairly unique from what i've seen both here on Royalroad and on other sites. I haven't seen a single grammatical error, which is more than I can say for some of the biggest stories. The exposition is believable for the first person point of view of the story without a bloat of information that we might never need. While character progression is limited outside of imroving the Villainess, I personally don't feel that anything else is needed because, as stated in the story by Ruddy "Do humans care when moths die? The same logic applies to Undead"

Cassano
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New spice for an old recipe

Reviewed at: Lady Letitia 1

Like the start seems like a new take on the villain genre

Let's see where this goes

Not really much more I wanna say but you need 50 words so yeah hope you are all having a good day and thanks for chapters

Would be nice if could include how many words I'm missing so I don't have count