Life is not a game: Ice

Life is not a game: Ice

by aoj90

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Tragedy
It all started as a great day until we all got powers and monsters came and killed everyone i will become stronger and make sure i am strong enough so this wont happen again.

Authors comment: my first time also this is going to be the first book and my sister is writing this with me but with a different Character i would like helpful feedback and tips.
P.S there will be graphic content such as rape and torturing so if your easily offended don't
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Zobbit
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an interesting story, cool magic system and a fucked up world, that's what I love about these kind stories^^

The chapters may be short, but I enjoy reading through this world so much, that I only want more chapters...  So I may not be able to judge about that :D

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story system and the fact that you let us find thing out at the same time the mc does makes a very good story can only imagine the monsters that will come if every story game and mitology is coming now

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