Age Of Adventure

by keikokumars

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Drama Fantasy Romance Harem Virtual Reality
Warning This fiction contains:
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“Kingdoms may fall and fail, but I do not."
A story of a guy who want to find money for his mother treatment and enter the world of virtual reality. The story tells of his life, his tribulation, his failure and his triumph. It is in Brave World he began to shine. It is the story of his legend, and how he became known as the greatest strategist in Brave World.

Arc 2 will be about the Gods and Aero adventure to retrieve back his sword.
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irondruid7
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I really love this story. Its a blend of fantasy world and real world problems. This story has a lot of strategy involved, and i like that it is clever and makes sense. In the latest chapters the vr world is turning out to be more than a bunch of 0s and 1s. This is definitely worth a read.
claws8367
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please continue!
shadowcerberus
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at firsth it started to fast but now its a great story.usualy mc gets brawn over brain but this mc got brawn and brain .i realy like it.
prima
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great strategy and not very deep story :p

grinding level by war..i like that :D

i am waiting for Aero/his party adventure in cave, swamp, forest, mountain, lake, ocean, or maybe in hell/heaven (god resident) :D

keep your hardwork :)

androg
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Great FF rather different from the rest

I gave 5 cookies, now I give 5 stars. This FF is not about normal action, its about warfare and strategy, using brain over brawn. 

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Previously I rated 5 for the uniqueness of the MC being about a strategist instead of a weapon swinger 

Now I am still giving a 5 because I think the story proceeds well with inclusion on other matters. It is no longer just about warfare with many new elements thrown into the fray. 

drakninja
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like the story so far. i am still waiting for him to get his payback after want they did to him.
wvskull
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YOU DARE TO END MY BROTHER AERO’S EPICNESS!! I’LL KILL YOU PERSONALLY! SPARTANS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Daimon
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The ending of the novel?

Great characters, awesome storyline, small errors in grammar (him/her/she/he), bad ending.

I personally do not understand why you ended it at Ch.59.

 

The story could go on for atleast another 50 chapters.

Some things you could of written:

A three way war between the papacy, deus and the MC.

MC helps the new King to become emperor.

More wars (I loved the first war).

Why the MC hated Amanda's sister, this was never explained.

 

Secondly,

You should get a native English PR, so that the story is easier to read, I myself got confused at some points in the story because of grammar.

You shouldn't of given the MC and others so much gold after wars (a few chapters before he helped the king, 2G was ALOT, suddenly he gets 30k gold.).

Also, maybe make some changes to the story itself, insted of 800k people going to war, make it 80k etc, the amount of people participating in wars makes it sound like theres hundreds of thousands players.

 

Don't rush things, your Light Novel was amazing for me untill the ending where the world blew up because of meteors.

Because of the meteors, the story ending felt like you AXED it for several reasons:

Lack of idea's

Lack of interest

 

I personally hope you will remove the world ending, and carry on with the story.

 

If you wish to talk about this review, to provide information about this story and your future plans, feel free to send me a PM, I will gladly listen to your story.

 

P.S, I do not understand the sequel chapter, are those idea's? or how it will go?

 

Your's sincerely,

 

Daimon

 

yoYo
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A story that evolves

Did someone ever tell you : watch(or read) this, it sucks at te beginning but it gets best past episode(chapter) number x. And you did endure that torture only to find out your friend has a very bad taste and the story doesn’t get better. This isn’t it! At first I was doubting this was proofread as stated because the grammar was  worse than 3stars I gave it. The story as well is pretty bad ’till chapter 7. That’s when the story evolves, even the grammar improves(to 3stars though). Basically it’s an adventure/strategy, no need to go into details as that would spoil it. I found myself rooting for the MC in his epic quest and I’m sure you will as well (At least I think it’s for this ff considering someone deleted my old review or it somehow didn’t save)

Swey
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Zhuge Liang Return,,

so what our strategy today …