The Era of Dreams

The Era of Dreams

by acornhh

What if everything you thought you knew flipped upside-down? What would you do? Where would you go?

The Era of Dreams is an enticing high-fantasy adventure novel that follows a young teenage girl (Jasmine Verglass) through a journey to find out who she is and what her role is in life. 

Jasmine is a princess in the country of Tzitanu. When the war that her brothers and father are fighting comes to an end, a tragic event occurs that sends her life into a spiral. She begins an adventure that sends her through hell and back all the while traveling through dangerous territories and remote lands. Jasmine meets many friends and foes alike with the ultimate goal of trying to solve the mystery of who she is. 

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lonelyID
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well written, and a gripping story,

Reviewed at: Chapter II

Not too much written so far, but I love everything that's happened. The writing style is unique, and the content is something fresh and new, Jasmine Verglass is an extremely likable and relatable main character in her feelings and thoughts, and each person introduced feels 3d and real, behaving well within their respective narratives. There have been some foreshadowing of a major plot, and I'm interested to see how it'll play out, highly recommend giving this a try!

Camelboy
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     I first read this earlier in the day while browsing the site. Throughout the rest of the evening, I found myself constantly thinking about this story, so I decided to come back and write a review. It must be deserving of one if I continued to mentally revisit it while going about my daily business.
     

     To start, I must say that I enjoyed what I've seen of Jasmine so far. While at the time of this review I only have access to chapter 1, what I've seen of the main character so far has been very enjoyable. She has a relatable mentality and is written in a way that makes her believable and realistic. I look forward to her development!
     

     I'm also enjoying the setting and starting point of the story. Names of people and places are creative, and the writing alludes to other elements that will, hopefully, get their time to shine on the page. I found myself craving more of this flavor.
     

     Can't wait for more!