In Progress Of Fantasy

In Progress Of Fantasy

by Inslayer

Her hands trembled, herself not knowing whether it was from fear or excitement.

When the system arrived, she thought that she wasn't on Earth any more. The system called it Earth, but the Earth she knew didn't have five moons orbiting around it. 

And if the system and her were talking about the same planet, and those mountains in the distance where the same ones she remembered being only a few kilometers away, this was absolutely going to be her second worst outing since the waterslides incident. 

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