Eleventh prince

Eleventh prince

by HomoLogous

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

MC is the necromancer by the name of Henrick who is destined to die very soon, so he decided to cheat death one more time by taking over the body of a royal prince.

The story will mostly follow MC and a couple of other people around him, his companions mostly, with the occasional chapter showing other people and explain the certain happenings in the world. 

MC is an antihero, powerful, and in a way the main antagonist of the story. The story itself won’t be anything genius or original, the focus will be mostly on progress, character development and worldbuilding. The story will make fun of itself sometimes but it will never be a full parody, that said it is nothing special either and I’m just writing it to have fun.

Keep in mind that my grammar is terrible and this is purely amateur work.

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Camelboy
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The first thing I noticed, right off the bat, is you know how to paint a picture. The words you use are descriptive and pull me into the story. Chapter 1 ends on a certain note that encourages me to continue, and that’s valuable. I can’t wait to read more!

valeskas
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Very memorable characters.

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I reread this story from time to time. Couldnt find it on fictionpress at one point, seems it moved here. That being said its pretty short and can go either way still. The grammar does not bother me at all, but I am used to various horrible translations, so its not an indicator.