(Small Exploits)

(Small Exploits)

by Engr00

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

In the beginning, there was darkness...

Then Leo found himself on another world.

A world with 'magic', dozens of races, and a very lopsided birth ratio.

Follow Leo as he uses his knowledge from earth to make a splash on this new world, trying to change it for the better while he stumbles into many (Small Exploits).

Additional Tags : [On r/HFY] [Rapid Power Progression] [Casual World Building]

(Edit : Because I don't want to get in trouble for excessive sexual content, I'm going to be skipping over "##.5 Chapters" whenever possible. They are not really core to the story, so look else where for those chapters if you're that interested in the "Plot".)

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L1zar9
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How could I even begin to write fifty, five zero, words about this fine literary work of fiction? Truly a credit not just to the author but to society for producing such wonderful minds capable of the greatness encapsulated in this web novel.

TLDR lizard women and good MC. The cheaty magic system isn't just boring to read, which is novel in and of itself. The idea that the MC's special advantage for being from earth is just knowledge that very much wouldn't be common in a quasi medieval society but directly applies to the magic there is great.

Tel
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Good story, but I wish the mana system was a bit more robust. The magic is frankly a bit wishy which is fine for action bits but a little much for the daily stuff. It's well worded and has decent charater development which is a plus. But the basic plot arc one is just slice of life so the major antagonist plot development felt contrived. Luckily however the pacing by that point was speeding up to action so it pushes past it well.
A+ for the wish fuffilment.


B- for the sex. (being generous for the comedy)


C- for the plot. (the rebellion)


B+ for rune magic. (but like the mana system it could be more robust)


A for Character development and interactions.