Knight's Betrayal

Knight's Betrayal

by PALLAV~

I was twelve.

I killed someone.

They sent me to the prison.

I was sent to prison to repay for the committed sins.

I obliged.

I obliged for five long years.

Only to get out on my seventeenth birthday to find something that changed...

EVERYTHING.

My Only Family was

DEAD.



This is a story about a boy who gets engulfed in a dark web of past and conspiracies. He has to find out about his past and get out of the huge abyss pulling him only deeper. 

Follow Erak in his search for answers and truth. To find the culprits who had taken away everything from him and exact the owed retribution.



Betrayal killed the god

Betrayal killed the devil alike.

Betrayal was the only sin that could kill,

Both Heart and Mind alike

A small innocent doll made of white straw

Was trapped in the claws

Of The Past of The Sin


What awaited this tender hands

Was being washed in Red

Red of the Evil

Red of the Intimate

Red of the Past

Red of the Sin


A horror unimaginable

A darkness unconceivable

Where Life was...

Worse than Death


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