The Heart is a Void: Ashes to Ashes

The Heart is a Void: Ashes to Ashes

by MOROSE

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  • Traumatising content

For Karel, the search for power erodes the sense of mercy.

When a bug traps players in a new, immersive VRMMO, and begins to undermine the system that protects them from experiencing pain in combat, the players scramble to seek power at all costs to avoid becoming victimised.

Many strive to become powerful mages, mastering the power of the elements, or train at combat with damaging weapons. While Karel had begun by trying to enhance his mage powers as far as possible, he eventually becomes disillusioned with this as he sees the power of others who use unconventional and amoral means to take advantage of the bugged game. As he explores this new, Free-For-All world, will he have to turn to cunning and ruthlessness to get ahead?

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