The Witches of Floroma - The Witches Curse

The Witches of Floroma - The Witches Curse

by Emi_The_Fairy

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

Gilbert is a young prince of the Kingdom of Luxur who has long been known as the kingdom’s ‘Pretty Prince.’ His nickname begins to take on a whole new meaning as strange things begin to occur to his body as his life is thrown into turmoil. In order to stop these changes he must set out with his sister, his best friends, and a collection of noble knights to slay the witch responsible. What will the young royal discover on this journey of self-discovery, romance, and magic?

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The following story includes topics of transition by magic, deadnaming, misgendering, abuse, manipulation, dysphoria, and trauma. This story also deals with elements of mental alteration and religion.

The text’s depictions present one perspective regarding gender identity and personal identity. Gender identity and experiences thereof are varied, numerous and fluid, and may diverge from the portrayals represented in the text. Reader discretion is advised.

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It's still early days, but this seems to be very well written. The characters are believable (and this is displayed in just 3 chapters).

The plot is interesting too, but it still early days.

Back to the writing. For example: The hook, is the promised gender bender and it's provided immediately. In my opinion, for gender bending to be compelling, the character must first be established as belonging to a gender before it's bent. This is accomplished very well. Again, in just 3 chapters.

This speaks to the quality of the writing and I am looking forward to reading more! 5/5