Feathery Delight

Feathery Delight

by Benjamin Weber

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

The world has been hard on young Kael. Living his life on the streets, Looking for a way out he tries many things to change his destiny, only to be met with failure again and again. Wallowing in self-loathing, he lives his days without much purpose or motivation. Life, however, had other plans. On a rainy night of watching life pass him by, an explosion suddenly rips our young protagonist out of the bland world he knew. Meeting an old man claiming to be able to use magic, will his life finally change? Will the world finally give him a chance?

This is a complete rewrite of my earlier story. Aside from my own personal problems with depression, there were many, many things I came to dislike about the way it was progressing. With the low quality of the earlier chapters, it was in dire need of at least an editing run. Instead of just editing the subpar chapters, I decided to just do it over again and change what I did not like.

Please also note that I am not a native English speaker and thus might make mistakes. I have tried hard to find and correct most, but I am certainly not perfect.
If you notice anything that is wrong just leave a comment below the chapter and I will try to get to it.

Cover by Lui Kohlmann http://lui-kohlmann.de/

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78 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
Just another rainy night 1 ago
Just another rainy night 2 ago
Just another rainy night 3 ago
Just another rainy night 4 ago
Just another rainy night 5 ago
The day after 1 ago
The day after 2 ago
The day after 3 ago
The Day after 4 ago
The day after 5 ago
And so it beginns 1 ago
And so it beginns 2 ago
And so it beginns 3 ago
And so it beginns 4 ago
And so it beginns 5 ago
And so it beginns 6 ago
And so it beginns 7 ago
New Friends 1 ago
New Friends 2 ago
New Friends 3 ago
New Friends 4 ago
New Friends 5 ago
New Friends 6 ago
Trust 1 ago
Trust 2 ago
Trust 3 ago
Magic for dummies 1 ago
Magic for dummies 2 ago
Nighttime adventures 1 ago
Nighttime adventures 2 ago
Nighttime adventures 3 ago
Nighttime adventures 4 ago
A fateful meeting 1 ago
Fateful meeting 2 ago
Fateful meeting 3 ago
Fateful meeting 4 ago
Feathery Delight 1 ago
Feathery Delight 2 ago
Feathery Delight 3 ago
Feathery Delight 4 ago
Feathery Delight 5 ago
Feathery Delight 6 ago
Feathery Delight 7 ago
A new world 1 ago
A new world 2 ago
A new world 3 ago
A new world 4 ago
Festival 1 ago
Festival 2 ago
Festival 3 ago
Alleyways again? 1 ago
Alleyways again? 2 ago
Alleyways again? 3 ago
Of Maces, Magic, and Monsters 1 ago
Of Maces, Magic, and Monsters 2 ago
Of Maces, Magic, and Monsters 3 ago
Of Maces, Magic, and Monsters 4 ago
Fated 1 ago
Fated 2 ago
Fated 3 ago
Fated 4 ago
Fated 5 ago
Consequences 1 ago
Consequences 2 ago
Consequences 3 ago
Consequences 4 ago
Consequences 5 ago
Recovery 1 ago
Recovery 2 ago
Recovery 3 ago
Recovery 4 ago
Recovery 5 ago
Recovery 6 ago
Recovery 7 ago
Recovery 8 ago
Epilogue ago
Afterword ago
Update, Preview Chapter ago

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