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Having fled the planet's surface to escape extinction seven centuries prior, the last remnants of humanity—living aboard the airship Ventus—face a new danger that threatens to finish the job.

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Medenagen
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Overall, an enjoyable tale to read.

The world setting is interesting, I loved the concept of the windchasers, and the technical side of the writing is excellent.  I think the first chapter did a fantastic job at introducing the world setting and it drew me in rather quickly. 

Personally, I find the writing style as a whole to fit well with the portrayal of the story.  However, depending on your tastes, there are areas in the story where the style may feel a bit dry.  I like this narration style myself, but your mileage may vary.

Rhaff
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Still early on,  so I can't accurately rate character devolvement yet, though it does look good so far though. Story looks very promising and I'm very much enjoying it.  I love the airship theme. The editing in the story is very good. Technically,  the grammar and punctuation are pretty much spot on. Keep it up!