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A world of fantasy and magic and a world of modern science and technology will fuse in one year and create a new world where everyone must adapt or die. A sympathizing being issued a test to one hundred people around Earth to grant them the strength to give humanity a fighting chance against the coming storm. Out of the hundred participants, only one survived earning him the title "Sole Survivor". Before the test, this individual wanted to keep to himself. With his new powers, he finds his morals won't allow him to sit idly by as innocents are at risk.
Full story will be split into a trilogy.
Act 1: Sole Survivor, Chapter 1 - Chapter 64
Act 2: Worlds War, Chapter 65 -
Act 3: ???
18+ for Strong violence, gore, language, some sexuality, nudity, and body horror
Cover Art by RRL user ngt.
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Love the story and the characters. I can’t wait to see where all of this goes.
I’ll admit though... sometimes the info dumps in the “excerpts” irk me.
Its like... I love the information, but get annoyed having to chew all of that when the flavor is in the story.
Its great for world building and for adding information about the recommendations and about Xoth... but sometimes.... I just skip to the meat of the story.
Don't let that discourage anyone though. This story is great, and I highly recommend it.
I read the first few chapters, and couldn't find the motivation to continue.
I never knew what the style score was meant for until now. This author seems to focus more on word count than on progressing the story. It's wishy-washy, really draggy, and very long-winded. He checked his status. He took out blah blah ingredients and cooked soup. He read the news. At first it was boring, and then it became irritating as I had to force myself to read through all the redundant text.
This is a pretty generic OP MC story, with nicely formatted blue tables to display all the MC's skills -- which serve to highlight just how OP he gets one chapter in. Not much in terms of plot or originality.
The grammar in this work isn't perfect, but is better than most I've seen and overall considered readable.
Characters, especially the MC, feel flat. This was the part that grated on my nerves the most. Conversations between different characters seem more like they are reading off a script than what they would naturally respond with; their personalities just don't come through. The same goes for their actions.
All in all, it's just the average RR fiction. Good effort, 3/5.
The story is good.
Was a bit dissapointed when it turned into a Harem story, but the tag is there so... meh.
If you are into Harem stories and a MC that is kinda aware of it all then this will be right up your alley.
started well but...
firstly, the MC does not act like a human. he is too quick to accept, trust, adapt and fall in love. he does not question anything that happens to him and accepts the impossible as normal and strange as standard.
secondly, for someone with an int score several times the human limit he does not even exploit his abilities and benefits. things like going to a library when you can absorb knowledge from books or asking the god about training stats. I'm a normal human and even i can think of these in a few seconds.
thirdly, the numerous plotholes. like people being able to understand the MC talking in an alien language or cops acting like idiots for no reason.
Lastly, the insane power of the enemy. not only can he outplay a god but overpower her as well. the gods chosen had to survive a test to get the system and then had to follow its rules. the bad guys minion (not even the demon lord himself) can hand out power like candy and seemingly boost power at will. there is no point in a story where the bad guy and his minions are playing a different game and can do whatever they want.
the board was set. his spell verses her champion, adding minions working behind the scenes, the ability to change the rules and random side characters/love interests makes this story more convoluted and much harder to write well. to use harry potter as an example. Harry was fighting Voldemort with side stories to fill it out. what he did not have to do was fight Voldemort, while exploring the deep ocean rift and learning the force.
I personally dropped the story after chapter 7. I was getting all excited about this OP mc stuff and was glad that I would have a replacement for “Gamer of the Dead” since it looks like the MC of that story isn’t going to be all OP and crap. However, it looks like the MC of this story if going to get a harem of girls all with powers above his, but he’s gonna be the white knight. Took a star off for the white knight bullshit and “betterment of the people” stuff since I dislike it, but the story itself isn’t bad.
It has a good plot, and it can totally be a really good read for other people. However, for me… It just doesn’t sit well.
I’d recommend anyone reading this comment to try it out and see how they like it. It has a decently strong MC and game like attributes with blue screens and skills and crap, but you’ll have to like a semi white knight MC that does stuff in the background and doesn’t want acknowledgement, and it looks like he is going to be out-powered in the end by his companions.
I wouldn’t have a problem with his thought process if it wasn’t for the fact that I can’t stand building up an MC to be OP and shit, giving him a 2x XP boost and making him godlike, only to foreshadow that he’ll be OUTSTRIPPED BY HIS FEMALE COMPANIONS which are probably going to be his harem members, and the guy is going to be the representative while being protected by his girls which is stupid. If it was going to be like that, I feel like we should have been given a warning. Well, whatever. See how you like it.
If I find out that he ends up being the strongest out of them all, then I'll come back. As for now, I'm leaving.
I like the story a lot. I see a lot of people saying that he accepts what's happening too easily. but hey a cyclops appears in front of you, what are you supposed to do, have an existential crisis about fantasy creatures appearing front of you, or actually fight it. when the proof is trying to kill you it's hard to ignore. It is accept reality or die. and if the main character dies it wouldn't be much of a story
I just caught up on this story read through chapter 81 the author does a great job of editing and the pacing of the story and plot are well thought out leaving you wanting more but not leaving you on a cliff
Its good.. I think its a bit slice of life ,coz it follow everday occurrences and event. A bit slow i think, and no explisit sexual description. But overall Oh Yeahh..
Not a bad story even with it being a harem book but it fits in as the other planet had that many female to make ratio. The wishy washy part made a lot more sense later as he's there as a teacher, lover, advisor ect. Glad it was restarted again as its a worthwhile read.
Solid stuff, give it a try