Treads, Rads, and Sand

Treads, Rads, and Sand

by RoosterTheRed

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

On a distant planet in a distant future, the crew of the Enoch, a tank the size of a large building, wage a multiple centuries-long war against an enemy they neither understand nor care to. The hostility of the planet in question is one thing, but there are hostile tanks looming in the sandstorms, hunting the Enoch just as the Enoch hunts them. With no end to the war in sight, can the crew of the Enoch survive to see another irradiated day?

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While the chapter count is low at time of review, the chapters are of high quality, and of good size. What I have read has been superb, perfectly treading the line between exhastive detail and a good pace. Can't wait for more!

 

Style: the story is first person, at times incorporating flow of consciousness to convey detailed information to the reader. Overall it comes across as unique, yet easily adapted to.

 

Story: don't have a whole lot of plot to work with at time of writing, but what I have seen has been good. Specifically it does a good job of having the details mentioned, about characters or the tank itself, mean something in the story.

 

Grammer: the grammer is not perfect, but for being a free story on this website it is great. Most mistakes are minor, and can slip by unnoticed unless you are looking for them.

 

Characters: characters are interesting and unique while still remaining believable. Just like for Story this assessment is only at 6 chapters, so not a lot to go off of. However, even sticking with just the ones present already the story would do well in this catagory.

 

This story has great promise, and I whole heartily look forward to more!