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They traveled to another world through a virtual reality machine created by a God, in what they thought for a long time was just a game, but ended up being real.
They went through a 'Great Cataclysm' that changed the world through magical energy, which transformed the world in an unthinkable way.
It has been thirty years since humanity faced the virtual reality machine and twenty years after the 'Great Cataclysm' which awakened abilities and started a magical and wonderful world very different from the old one.
Now a young woman arrives in a city in the middle of the sea to attend an academy.
What is her objective? What is the reason for her arrival? And mainly... Who is she?
Follow the adventure of Aurora whose life, values, and attitude will be known in due course, along with her past, secrets, virtues, and defects.
Modern world, magical world, female protagonist.
Translation of my original work in Spanish with more than 500 chapters, two volumes finished, and although the first volume is slow, from the second the pace changes.
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The story is paced very fast. Even though many of the developments occur abruptly, the story managed to retain my attention.
The premise is a bit like the anime Boku no Hero Academia, that is it has a hero academy. Apart from that the whole world and its overall complexity felt different to me. The main characters have unique perks that set them apart. Many might find this story interesting, especially those who like the fast developments that occur in anime and manga. But I personally thought that some of the elements of the story needed more buildup.
Overall, it's a good story to read. The theme is used quite well, as well as generating a good amount of interest in the world and what it can contribute without feeling tired. Although it has many things that can be improved, it is a consistent enough story to follow up on.
the argumentative style is quite well achieved, it is not heavy and can be read quite fluently. Although it has moments where you can half feel what you want to convey, it is not common, so it is not usually an inconvenience. A good point in favor that the novel has are the pov, although most of them at the beginning were from the MC, the more the story goes, the more variety there is that makes the world expand pleasantly.
the story in broad strokes is good and broad, which allows to cover many points without losing the main plot. generates a lot of interest and captivates the reader so that he immerses himself even more to explore the mysteries of the world of the novel, which is what makes the story very good. Some point to emphasize would be that although it has a very good story, from time to time points jump that could be covered much better, giving it more depth and narrative, and putting the situation in a much more manageable context that perfectly feeds the personality of the characters.
About the characters there is not much to say because they are quite well elaborated and you can sympathize with them and their situations, so I really have nothing to criticize them other than personal points of view regarding any of them.
Finally, it is a good novel that is highly recommended.
Note: As a reader in Spanish of the novel where you go much further ahead, I must say that what awaits you will make you follow it quite closely.
here Spanish reader, being honest this story for me is not the best but I have dedicated more time to it than to daily exercise so XD the novel has a not very striking female protagonist, secondary characters with a background and development that I love , in addition to the fact that the initial mystery that the work gives you is clarified very quickly with a quick reading, but that does not make it bad, rather it makes it better, personally I highly recommend it to you my English-speaking friends, without further ado I hope you like it a lot, that they do not give a bad rating and that they offer some potatoes to the goddess alice, save the potatoes!!!
i like how the author doesnt waste words with useless bulls**t or by having their characters doing the usual "cool", edgy, etc tropes that im tired about; also theres a healthy bit of mistery which is being revealed at a pace that i find proper in the way that is presented.
unfortunaly the author has an issue with gender words in which they are constantly mixing the he,she,him,her or whatever.
other than that the story,characters and everything else seems pretty regular(though i think its because it is barely starting at the point of my review) but a good read when in need of something not so serious or dumb.
Edit: i was right, after reading the spanish version up to chapter 685 i can say that i dont regret reading this theres more to come.
I'm not good at reviews and usually don't do them but there isn't single review on this story yet and i really enjoying it.
It is well written story about 20y old calm female lead and her sister, who joined into prestigious battle academy as vacation from work.
Most characters feels real and dont act illogical.
Worldbuilding: the world seems to work, we receive some information on the history and other all-around info mostly in form of classes in the academy, but most info is not necessary for the story
Storyline: mostly academy ark, but overall fairly average
-one main character always eating(10-20% of her action)
-one main character is always shown to others as incompetent while being the opposite
--> should have comedy tag
-main characters are shrouded in mysteries that are constantly hinted at but you at most get 1-2 sentences developing their backstory every handful of chapters. Those hints also have no value to the story and are just repetitive
-infodumps with no effect on the story
-poorly written battles
Overall, I think this is a great story. Personally, I have about 50 tabs of web novels that I check everyday for updates, and this has quickly become one of my most looked forward too. This is also the first time I have written a review, so I'll try to do the best I can.
The story is well written, the author tends to focus on the pov of just the main character for a majority of the story thus far. As of late though, she has started to add more scenes from others perspective. I think this has been very well done, it does not feel forced and it adds nice context to the story. It also helps to make the reader care more about the characters.
I think the story is great, it's very interesting and had me quickly binging through all 100 chapters so far written when I discovered it. There are a few things I am pretty excited to see happen, a little more insight into the MCs family or background would be great. There has been plenty of foreshadowing there, so I am excited to see it come out. There is not really any filler, and I have never hit a point where I feel disengaged or do not feel like reading more.
Overall the story is pretty well written. The Grammar is not perfect, as this story was translated from the authors native tongue, but it is by no means bad and does not detract from the story at all. The author has done a good job of translating the story to english..
The characters are incredibly well written. It takes a couple chapters to really get into, but then you really start to care for the characters and feel for their situation. The author does a great job of building that emotional connection between the reader and the characters.
It's a great story, I highly recommend reading it. I expect it to jump up the ranks soon enough as more folks discover it. On top of that, the author is consistently uploading new chapters.