Agnes' Journey to Become an Archimage

Agnes' Journey to Become an Archimage

by KuriousKitty

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The balance in the magical world of Tyrain is shifting. The monster menace grows stronger, the bureaucracy of the ancient empire grows corrupt and the nations engage in constant warfare. Change is coming, will Agnes be able to adapt to a world in chaos, becoming a true mage, or will she fall.

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So what keeps me going is that i'm really interrested where the main character ends up in this this story. A lot of in this second story of the author feels also quite rushed and we keep getting fast forwarded a lot in this story. Some smother transitions might be nice or maybe to cut some parts of the story and fill out some other parts so that it doesn't feel to rushed sometimes (just a thought, I don't feel adequate to give advice). The main characters are likeable but could use some more personality. There will be a dungon scene in this story which I liked best! Keep up the good work and keep improving or not, because you can do the fuck ever you want =)!