Penalise the Player

Penalise the Player

by closedwhisper

Original HIATUS Adventure Comedy Fantasy
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity

Hospitalised. Incarcerated. Tortured by obnoxious fairies. Oh, when will this day be over? 

Arline has been saved--mostly. Her body is being maintained and the public is aware of her...technical difficulties. But life still sucks. She's still stuck in a game after all.

And now new dangers are but a code-string away...

Sequel to Playing Solitaire.

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I'm Happy the Story Continues

Reviewed at: 2: Rational Arrangements

I just finished the first book, and I'm super happy the author's started on a second.

Something quick and positive: the author's writing style is engaging without being informal (if that makes sense), which makes me want to read more. I can't wait!

I'll post an advanced review once there are some more chapters, but I'm confident it'll be 5-stars across the board.