The last star

The last star

by VP1

Awakening in a forest our protagonist does not remember her name, her past or where she is. She has to learn how to defend for herself, find allies and perhaps find out who she is and why she can't remember anything. 

"The last star" is the second work I'm working on as a sort of procrastination from my first work "Morninglight". English is not my first language so any feedback on grammar and spelling is greatly appreciated. 

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