SOUL LAND: DOULUO DALU THE GAME

SOUL LAND: DOULUO DALU THE GAME

by SHADOW_YAGAMI

Unsatisfied with the Douluo Dalu aka Soul Land,  I downloaded a mysterious game - Duoluo Dalu. But after completing the game to a certain degree, something unexpected happened!  I found myself getting reincarnated as Tang San. Accompany me, as I set out on A journey to do what the main character of Soul land wasn't able to do.

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DrBuller
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Doesnt deserve the current score.

Reviewed at: CHAPTER 9

So I got through the first four chapters, looking for any real reason that the score was 0.5/5. To be fully honest with anybody reading this, I do not understand why it's like that. Sure, there might be some problems with grammar, a few personal issues with the style and sentence structure, and a general divergence from what I usually read, I can't call this anything close to a steaming pile of garbage. Closer to an unfilled garbage can(which is much better in my opinion). It has the potential to go down to a three if the story worsens later on, but it doesn't deserve anything lower than that.

Rant over. 4/5 from me.

THE_READER who reads
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Keep it up. This is by far one of the best soul land fiction. Mostly no one focuses on the reincarnation part, and be like either they died without any reason or god kills them while jokingly reincarnating them into soul land, giving them an op system or fulfilling 3 wishes. This shows author doesn't respect their works. Other than that, everyone reincarnates someone different on their own journey using cheats, it's my first time seeing someone reincarnate as Tang San. 

 

4.5/5 from me... don't disappoint me by dropping it 

holbita
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Not gonna lie, even though Soul Land world makes for a perfect videogame world I still have a cultural shock reading the "interface moments", it's not bad at all and as such I reflect it on my rating. I'm interested to see how you will difer from the original story. 

Are you planning on adding new side characters and drop some of the original ones? That is something that I would be interesting in seeing, same as a bit more focus to the damn hammer this time, poor thing got almost no screen time in the original.

I feel that is too early in the story to guess how far you are going to stray from the original story but I am definitely curious.