Bandit don't start as Bandits
by Miracle Doctor
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- Profanity
- Sexual Content
- Traumatising content
You always read zombie stories with the dumb zombies or special types of zombies. The easy bash in the heads and the need for a swarm of them to kill a survivor.
Well, I wanted to try a different style of zombies. Showcasing the brilliance of us gamers that other stories downplay. Of course sneak a little revenge in the Starbucks clerk that messed up my order. But welcome to the new world of zombies. The new order of fighting for your life.. also please give me feedback.. first draft.. do wish to prefect the art as much as possible.
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This kinda insane?
Reviewed at: Pay dues to the fallen
(Disclaimer I did not read particularly far as of writing this so take my options with a grain of salt)
In my personal opinion the story could do with a lot of work, the first chapter is super rough and needs a rewrite because I barely made it through it. I kinda lost hope for the story after the mc refered to a highschooler as slutty.
Grammar is decent but the sentence and paragraph structure needs a lot of work.
I'll give the author credit theres some nice action scenes that I enjoyed and the idea of intelligent evolving zombies is neat but it needs some real work to the MC and the surrounding characters. So in summary characters= bad, plot= decent, action= good, grammar= passable.
Edit:changed it to 4 stars because i felt it was warrented