This story tells about an ordinary man named Ichibei Raven, an otaku who can mix well with normies; he is a man who aims to live comfortably without working in a country that upholds the Japanese work ethic. However, over time it was discovered that he had problems with his memory; at the right time, his parents came to see him and said that he was a person from another world. When a responsibility began to come to him, there was only one thing he said "if other people can do it, why should I?. Thus, it begins a story about the journey of a young half otaku and normies to achieve what he wants, be it an elf, a passionate, beautiful girl. Everything will be achieved if he is able.
This is a story where humans strive to contradict each other. Here, the main character keeps watching while acting for personal interests that might affect someone close to him or even the world. That's why I brought the reverse Sekai theme because it's something I've always thought about for a long time. There was an incident that seemed normal, but without realizing it, it will affect power, money, or anything desired in worldly desires. In the end, those who can understand the situation will win everything, just like a quote from history and the future will be written by the winner no matter whether they are good or bad.
It tells about a person who has no purpose in life, even though he always thinks that everything he does must have meaning.
Whether to be an ordinary person or an important person, these things will lead to one goal, namely personal interest. Therefore, in this novel, we will see how to become a person who can balance it, whether love, wealth, and desire will always move humanity.
I hope, it will be an interesting story.
"I think this is where I should be."
Because English is not my primary language, so I apologize for some mistakes that I missed.
When I upload, I will equate it with the local time in Indonesia.
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I am going to prefice this with saying that I have notheing against the auther and I think they can and will improve with time. Sorry if this revew is a bit harsh but this is my honest opinion of the novel.
Style: As said in the description of the novel at the time of this review this is writtern in a japanese style meaning more tell than show, lots of troupes and cringy attempts at comedy that fall flat.
Grammar: Terrible but not unreadable. the auther struggles with tenses and pronouns aswell as a few sentaces a chapter that just plain don't make sense.
Story: Even though I am not very far into the novel yet you can already get a sense that this is just goning to be another one of those 'MC is stupid and makes stupid dcisions but everyone else is smehow dumber so it all works out' kind of novels.
Character: I wish i could give this a negative score this MC is the kind, nieve but always some how calm type which is so common in novels writern in this style this makes the MC annoying and frustraiting. Example in the spoiler.
He meets his parents who for all he knows abandoned him with his grandparents and he feels bad for them and forgives them like WTF they ABANDONED you and left you financially struggeling despite being rich.
He gets magicly transported to another world and just continues with his day of 'getting to know his 'parents', come on man react in some way. Panic, joy anything I know cardboard boxes more expressive.
His mother is clearly schizophrenic or something and puts his life in danger by using her powers and he's not even mad or scared just worried about popping a bonner.
Then to remove his 'seal' on his powers they STAB him in his VITALS and as he's bleeding out and is as he sees it about to DIE he is telling them to calm down dude has no self presivation or any instincts what so ever.
My unprompted, unprofessional advise to the auther is to stop trying to use the 'japanese' novel style and to instead try to find there own style of writing because they clearly have ideas and the passion to write so limiting themselves to a pre-exisrting style is unwise and will restrict them in their development as a writer.
At first I was a little hesitant in reading this story, because basically this is a new theme for me. but after I read a few things, I decided to review your novel.
Style : at first I had a little trouble understanding what was going on, but as the chapter progressed I was able to grasp the meaning of this new thing.
Grammar : not very good, but I can understand because this is your first novel. I can understand errors like this.
Story : this is what makes my doubts disappear, most stories only talk about issekai by being hit by a truck, but this is the first time I see the story from the point of view of people who come from another world, go to a world that can be said to be like earth. then he returned to his original world, this is really interesting for me, I always wait for the continuation.
Character : there are several things that remind me of some light novels that I have read, here Raven looks like the character Guren from owari no seraph, did you get inspired by him from there, his indifference but caring nature. I'm a bit guessing about this. Regarding Raven mother, her attitude is completely different, do you really have an interest in Milf, I can understand that.
the rest, I hope there will be improvements in the future because your story is full of potential