Monsters and Maidens

Monsters and Maidens

by Ravnicrasol

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

A school-bus gets sucked into a dark forest.

Deadly monsters lurk around every corner. They look almost human, but they are anything but.

Humanity struggles for survival.

What dangers and secrets await our stranded protagonists?

Chapters are posted Mon-Wed-Thu-Fri-Sun 22:00 CET.


Warnings:

This is a slow-burn story, answers and explanations aren't given right away.

The setting is grim-dark. And our protagonists are as human as they can get.

No superpowers. No easy trips. Heroes must earn their glory. Villains must earn their strength.

There are 4 main characters around which the story orbits, each having their own narrative and perspective to the setting/events.


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Table of Contents
236 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 001 [Rick] ago
Chapter 002 [Rick] ago
Chapter 003 [Rick] ago
Chapter 004 [Rick] ago
Chapter 005 [Rick] ago
Chapter 006 [Rick] ago
Chapter 007 [Rick] ago
Chapter 008 [Rick] ago
Chapter 009 [Rick] ago
Chapter 010 [Rick] ago
Chapter 011 [Rick] ago
Chapter 012 [Rick] ago
Chapter 013 [Mark] ago
Chapter 014 [Mark] ago
Chapter 015 [Rick] ago
Chapter 016 [Rick] ago
Chapter 017 [Rick] ago
Chapter 018 [Alice] ago
Chapter 019 [Alice] ago
Chapter 020 [Mark] ago
Chapter 021 [Mark] ago
Chapter 022 [Mark] ago
Chapter 023 [Mark] ago
Chapter 024 [Rick] ago
Chapter 025 [Rick] ago
Chapter 026 [Rick] ago
Chapter 027 [Rick][🍋] ago
Chapter 028 [Rick] ago
Chapter 029 [Mark] ago
Chapter 030 [Mark] ago
Chapter 031 [Mark] ago
Chapter 032 [Mark] ago
Chapter 033 [Mark] ago
Chapter 034 [Alice] ago
Chapter 035 [Rick] ago
Chapter 036 [Rick] ago
Chapter 037 [Rick] ago
Chapter 038 [Catherine][🍋ish] ago
Chapter 039 [Rick] ago
Chapter 040 [Rick] ago
Chapter 041 [Rick] ago
Chapter 042 [Mark][🍋] ago
Chapter 043 [Barry] ago
Chapter 044 [Barry] ago
Chapter 045 [Barry] ago
Chapter 046 [Barry] ago
Chapter 047 [Alice] ago
Chapter 048 [Rick] ago
Chapter 049 [Rick] ago
Chapter 050 [Mark] ago
Chapter 051 [Mark] ago
Chapter 052 [Mark] ago
Chapter 053 [Rick] ago
Chapter 054 [Rick] ago
Chapter 055 [Alice] ago
Chapter 056 [Alice] ago
Chapter 056.1 [Bonus][Tomas] (Volume 1 End) ago
Chapter 057 [Rick](Volume 2 Start) ago
Chapter 058 [Rick] ago
Chapter 059 [Rick] ago
Chapter 060 [Mark][🍋] ago
Chapter 061 [Mark] ago
Chapter 062 [Barry] ago
Chapter 063 [Barry] ago
Chapter 064 [Barry] ago
Chapter 065 [Alice] ago
Chapter 066 [Alice] ago
Chapter 067 [Alice] ago
Chapter 068 [Tomas] ago
Chapter 069 [Rick] ago
Chapter 070 [Alice] ago
Chapter 071 [Mark] ago
Chapter 072 [Rick] ago
Chapter 073 [Rick] ago
Chapter 074 [Alice] ago
Chapter 075 [Alice] ago
Chapter 076 [Alice] ago
Chapter 077 [Barry] ago
Chapter 078 [Rick] ago
Chapter 079 [Rick] ago
Chapter 080 [Rick] ago
Chapter 081 [Rick] ago
Chapter 082 [Alice] ago
Chapter 083 [Mark] ago
Chapter 084 [Mark] ago
Chapter 085 [Rick] ago
Chapter 086 [Rick] ago
Chapter 087 [Rick] ago
Chapter 088 [Rick] ago
Chapter 089 [Rick] ago
Chapter 090 [Rick] ago
Chapter 091 [Alice] ago
Chapter 092 [Alice] ago
Chapter 093 [Monica] ago
Chapter 094 [Monica] ago
Chapter 095 [Rick] ago
Chapter 096 [Alice] ago
Chapter 097 [Rick] ago
Chapter 098 [Rick] ago
Chapter 099 [Squad Leader Darcy] ago
Chapter 100 [Squad Leader Ray] ago
Chapter 101 [Knight Captain Bronte] ago
Chapter 102 [Knight Scout Celine] ago
Chapter 103 [Baron Matthew Flirlai the Second] ago
Chapter 104 [Rick] ago
Chapter 105 [Rick] ago
Chapter 106 [Barry] ago
Chapter 107 [Brye] ago
Chapter 108 [Mark] ago
Chapter 109 [Brye] ago
Chapter 110 [Mark][🍋] ago
Chapter 111 [Mark] ago
Chapter 112 [Barry] ago
Chapter 113 [Barry] ago
Chapter 114 [Mark] ago
Chapter 115 [Barry](End Volume 2) ago
Chapter 116 [Alice](Volume 2 Bonus) ago
Chapter 117 [Dia](Volume 2 Bonus) ago
Chapter 118 [Major Gabriel Huge](Volume 2 Bonus) ago
Chapter 119 [???](Volume 2 Bonus) ago
Chapter 120 [Freya](Volume 2 Bonus) ago
Chapter 121 [Rick][🍋🍋](Volume 2 Bonus) ago
Chapter 122 [???][🍋](Volume 2 Bonus) ago
Chapter 123 [Rick](Start Volume 3) ago
Chapter 124 [Rick] ago
Chapter 125 [Mark] ago
Chapter 126 [Mark] ago
Chapter 127 [Alice] ago
Chapter 128 [Alice] ago
Chapter 129 [Barry] ago
Chapter 130 [Rick] ago
Chapter 131 [Rick] ago
Chapter 132 [Rick] ago
Chapter 133 [Rick][🍋🍋] ago
Chapter 134 [Rick] ago
Chapter 135 [Alice] ago
Chapter 136 [Barry] ago
Chapter 137 [Rick] ago
Chapter 138 [Rick] ago
Chapter 139 [Barry] ago
Chapter 140 [Barry] ago
Chapter 141 [Alice] ago
Chapter 142 [Barry] ago
Chapter 143 [Mark] ago
Chapter 144 [Mark] ago
Chapter 145 [Mark] ago
Chapter 146 [Rick] ago
Chapter 147 [Kat] ago
Chapter 148 [Rick] ago
Chapter 149 [Monica] ago
Chapter 150 [???][🍋] ago
Chapter 151 [Barry] ago
Chapter 152 [Barry] ago
Chapter 153 [Alice] ago
Chapter 154 [Rick] ago
Chapter 155 [Mark] ago
Chapter 156 [Captain Eustine] ago
Chapter 157 [Barry][🍋] ago
Chapter 158 [Alice] ago
Chapter 159 [Alice] ago
Chapter 160 [Rick] ago
Chapter 161 [Rick] ago
Chapter 162 [Rick] ago
Chapter 163 [Rick] ago
Chapter 164 [Rick] ago
Chapter 165 [Dia] ago
Chapter 166 [Mark] ago
Chapter 167 [Ginny] ago
Chapter 168 [Rick] ago
Chapter 169 [Lady Embla] ago
Chapter 170 [Mr. Gabriel] ago
Chapter 171 [Pan] ago
Chapter 172 [Rick] ago
Chapter 173 [Rick] ago
Chapter 174 [Royal Knight Captain Deneva] ago
Chapter 175 [Royal Knight Captain Deneva] ago
Chapter 176 [Barry] ago
Chapter 177 [Noah] ago
Chapter 178 [Noah] ago
Chapter 179 [Barry] ago
Chapter 180 [Helga] ago
Chapter 181 [???] ago
Chapter 182 [Barry] ago
Chapter 183 [Rick] ago
Chapter 184 [Rick] ago
Chapter 185 [Tomas] ago
Chapter 186 [Tomas] ago
Chapter 187 [Mark] ago
Chapter 188 [???] ago
Chapter 189 [Barry] ago
Chapter 190 [Barry] ago
Chapter 191 [Monica] ago
Chapter 192 [Rick] ago
Chapter 193 [Captain Deneva] ago
Chapter 194 [Rick] ago
Chapter 195 [???] ago
Chapter 196 [Little Mouse] ago
Chapter 197 [Alice] ago
Chapter 198 [Rick] ago
Chapter 199 [Rick] ago
Chapter 200 [Lala] ago
Chapter 201 [Mark] ago
Chapter 202 [Barry] ago
Chapter 203 [Alice] ago
Chapter 204 [Barry] ago
Chapter 205 [Rick] ago
Chapter 206 [Monica] ago
Chapter 207 [Barry] ago
Chapter 208 [Embla] ago
Chapter 209 [Dagmar] ago
Chapter 210 [Alice] ago
Chapter 211 [Dia] ago
Chapter 212 [Rick] ago
Chapter 213 [Rick] ago
Chapter 214 [Kiara] ago
Chapter 215 [Monica] ago
Chapter 216 [Dia] ago
Chapter 217 [Earl Vitchatt] ago
Chapter 218 [Rick] ago
Chapter 219 [Monica] ago
Chapter 220 [Rick] ago
Chapter 221 [Throag] ago
Chapter 222 [Barry] ago
Chapter 223 [Embla] ago
Chapter 224 [Alice] ago
Chapter 225 [Kajou] ago
Chapter 226 [Helga] ago
Chapter 227 [Kajou] ago
Chapter 228 [Barry] ago
Chapter 229 [Barry] ago
Chapter 230 [Earl Vitchatt] ago
Chapter 231 [Alice] ago
Chapter 232 [Rick] ago
Chapter 233 [Rick][🍋🍋] ago
Chapter 234 [Mark] (Volume 3 End) ago
Volume 4, Alchimia Rex ago

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TyrAurelius
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A darker more realistic take on the genre

Reviewed at: Chapter 019 [Alice]

This is a really unique take on the isekai/harem/monster girl novel. As of chapter 19 there is no harem yet, but you can see where it will come from and why the harem dynamic exists in the new world. 

This story does not follow the classic wish fulfillment featuring either 1) a teenage nerd boy with no social skills who inexplicably has Mary Sues fall all over him and may or may not underservedly acquire some absurdly OP power or 2) a Gary Stu with about as much depth as a puddle and the same cast of Mary Sues and probably some backstory that establishes a unique advantage or allows for such a power to manifest upon a specific event. Instead the author chooses a teacher with clear strengths and flaws reflective of real teachers (you will likely have met a teacher like this at some point in your life) as our MC, and through Chapter 19 he has no powers at all.  Likewise the potential harem members are not Mary Sues but monster girls that are actually monstrous. 

Furthermore, the harem formation here is inherently manipulative and arises out of survivalistic need in a grimdark fantasy world where the transplantees are prey.

 

The surrounding cast also has some depth, and it looks like the author plans to keep fleshing out 2-3 primary characters and maybe another 5-6 side characters with continuous dedicated development. So far this has been done very well, ... 

though the subplot surrounding the troublesome kid stands out as being much weaker than the others (with an overly one dimensional villain in the stepmother and fairly one dimensional characterization of the brothers) so far. It is admittedly far far too early to truly condemn this plotline.

... and the author has been particularly successful in creating side characters with different perspectives on the same events, with each of their perceived understandings being reasonable in the context of their observational perspective and their personalities.

Overall, I strongly recommend this story if you are a fan of isekai and harem stories. If you are not a fan of harem stories, I would still recommend giving this a shot. I cannot promise that it will not devolve into the tropes that I know most harem-haters (very reasonably) loathe, but I can say that as of Chapter 19 this story is NOT on a trajectory to run afoul of them. Minus maybe the smut section trope. That will probably happen here.

NeonDust
Overall

Grimdark-esque take on the monster girl fantasy

Reviewed at: Chapter 019 [Alice]

I really like the attempt on monster girls being actual "Monsters", Its too early to say as of yet, but the story is well on road with a survivalistic view point with multiple characters on lead. None of the characters seem to follow common anarchical tropes or are antagonising to a fault in conflicting situations, which in my book is a plus. The story does attempt to paint elements of danger in situations and does so pretty nicely. 

That said, i would really hope to see the domineering nature of "monster girls" stay in effect and that they are at no point "tame" in any way or suddenly gain complex emotional empathy.  

Alimaeus
Overall

This was originally Of monstergirls and men but the rewrite has raised the bar dramatically. What was originally an okay read but really monstergirl fetish fuel has now been rasied to the level of a quality novel.

I'm excited to see how ravnicrasol will improve the already decent story with a new writing style.

Nadoxx
Overall

Enjoyed this story quite a bit, I appreciated the grim dark approach to the poke girl esq theme, my only negative would be the multiple POV's, which is more of a personal taste. Look forward to seeing where the author takes it from here, as I feel that they are improving as the story progresses.

Slvl710
Overall

if digimon was an adult anime it would probably be similar to this story, I normally despise mutiple pov stories, usually marking them as not interested, but this is actually done really well with the main characters having intereacted with each other before ever switching to them, giving us a reason to even care about them. 5/5

Polarwrath
Overall

Horroresk Action Romance

Reviewed at: Chapter 001 [Rick]

So before you put this amazing work  away for one reason or another. It starts off with horror... but thats just to get the mood going. Life and death is part of the theme in this one, then comes romance before mystery. The Author loves to sprinkle in hints and bits of lore here and there. I wont spoil anything with this but READ IT. Monica is best girl and you know it

MadPengu
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Without going too much into details, it is a really good story, easily in the top 4% on this site.

Now going into details, I would like to mention a few points:

1. The story has multiple protagonists (although Rick is most definitely the focus) and most readers probably will find themselves having the favourite and the hated one (looking at you Mark) either because of their personality or the plot surrounding their perspective - not really a criticism, just thought it worth mentioning.

2. Some elements of the novel are rather fetishistic (while some others are rather graphic and drastic) and although those themes are tactfully approached and wonderfully written, some people might find those elements offputting (I personally enjoy them greatly).

3. The story has a very grounded approach to its fantasy setting, characters are generally wary of everything and some downright at odds with the new reality, you won't find characters embracing the allure of the fantasy world that is prevalent in other novels of this genre (at least on this site).

4. My biggest praise for this story is that as a whole this novel could have easily turned garbage - lots of its elements, if taken too far in one direction could have ruined the story; either too much sex, too much despair, too much meandring, too light of a focus on the world... the list can go on and on. The author pulled off quite a bit of a balancing act and that is why I am rating the story 5/5.

Khaos321999
Overall

[Updated Review] Stay healthy Author

Reviewed at: Chapter 196 [Little Mouse]

To the Author :

Big No to daily updates.

The Author shouldn't force himself in this suicidal endeavour to burn himself out. Please at max upload only 3 per week, Any more and it will be very unhealthy. (I can see your hairline receding from here)

Now the Plot line :

Typical MC gets Isekaii'd but in a weird world. A world where if Pokemons were catgirls and (VERY) dangerous. So the story is a mix of Lewd and Dark and More Lewd.

Smilejb4444
Overall

I thoroughly enjoyed this web novel.  I can't think of much off hand that characters say or do that seem unreasonable.  Some grammar and spelling mistakes.   Not a fan of multiple mc but it mostly worked.  Just a couple it times did it feel like too much.  When that happens, feels like it's all over the place.  I think at one point, you had 6 chapters with a different mc between each. Hard to stay invested in one characters story if you have to read 5 others before you can continue off on that character.  Heading to volume 4 book 2 now.