ALL HAIL THE VAMPIRE KING

ALL HAIL THE VAMPIRE KING

by Senior_elder

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

The king of beasts stands on a high mountain, claws out ready to pounce on his unsuspecting enemies. His long cloak flaps wildly in the wind.

In a cave, dragons sleep soundly after a wild mating session. Their very breath brings woes to mortals. 

In a forgotten highland, titans and giants wage a never ending war, their very step shaking the earth.

And in a dark place, a creature is born, no goals in mind but doomed for greatness.

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*Warning*

Start might be slow.

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A/N

It is my second month since I got into writing, I'd like to say I'm better than when I started and will only get better.

English is my second language so please help me whenever you see fit.

I found the cover randomly, if the owner wants it removed or credit please pm me

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I am thoroughly surprised by the development of this story. Not only does the MC start as a bat which I rarely read about but develops rapidly in my opinion (others may think of this as a medium or slow-paced story). I also like the mystery behind the shrouded humanoid in the depths of the bat's consciousness.

Anyways give this novel a shot, you might just like it.