Monastis Monestrum

Monastis Monestrum

by Morvram

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Nearly two hundred and fifty years have passed since the world ended, and humanity, though changed forever by the otherworldly forces that once destroyed the land, lives on. Soldiers of the God-Emperor Aivor have come to the village of Etyslund, seeking out what they believe to be a dangerous cult that could bring a second apocalypse to the world. In this village lives a family, members of the very organization these soldiers came to fight against. The old city, where help might be found, is weeks away, and the Empire's outposts too scattered to gather reinforcements.

"I fear that the peace of a new world cannot last forever, for we are not so different from the old humanity as we would like to believe." So warned the scholars of the past.

In a new world, where old gods walk again, humanity has changed, but some part of the old world lives on.

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Table of Contents
77 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
Part 1, Marga: Cigdem and Zoe ago
Part 1, Marga: Etyslund ago
Part 1, Marga: Collapse ago
Part 1, Marga: The outskirts ago
Part 1, Marga: Stepan ago
Part 1, Marga: Fear ago
Part 1, Marga: Good Soldiers ago
Part 1, Marga: Another Perspective ago
Part 1, Marga: The Orchard ago
Part 1, Marga: Closing [END PART 1] ago
Part 2, Run away sister: Before ago
Part 2, Run away sister: Voloshko ago
Part 2, Run away sister: Remembering ago
Part 2, Run away sister: Library ago
Part 2, Run away sister: Normal ago
Part 2, Run away sister: Burden ago
Part 2, run away sister: Aleks ago
Part 2, Run away sister: Godspeech ago
Part 2, Run away sister: Standdown ago
Part 2, Run away sister: Parley ago
Part 2, Run away sister: Stronger [END PART 2] ago
Part 3, In Your Honor: Memory ago
Part 3, In Your Honor: Together ago
Part 3, In Your Honor: Negotiation ago
Part 3, In Your Honor: Stains ago
Part 3, In Your Honor: Dispersion ago
Part 3, In Your Honor: Barricade ago
Part 3, In Your Honor: The Aether-Touched ago
Part 3, In Your Honor: Plato ago
Part 3, In Your Honor: Coming for You ago
Part 3, In Your Honor: Hilda [END PART 3] ago
Part 4: Appeal/Forgiveness: Raz ago
Part 4, Appeal/Forgiveness: Zelenko ago
Part 4, Appeal/Forgiveness: Hilda ago
Part 4, Appeal/Forgiveness: Aleks ago
Part 4, Appeal/Forgiveness: Siblings ago
Part 4, Appeal/Forgiveness: Prisoners ago
Part 4, Appeal/Forgiveness: Arshay ago
Part 4, Appeal/Forgiveness: Everybody ago
Part 4, Appeal/Forgiveness: The Engine ago
Part 4, Appeal/Forgiveness: The Bullet ago
Part 4, Appeal/Forgiveness: Deserving ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: Vision ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: Arrival ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: Battle ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: Eirchais ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: Aetheric ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: Peace ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: Home ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: Wallshaker ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: Don't Forget Why You're Here ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: The Dance ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: Escape ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: Cold ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: Youth ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: Remembering ago
Part 5, No Wall Stands Forever: Aivor ago
Part 6, Dancers at the Lake: The Dancers ago
Part 6, Dancers at the Lake: Zoe ago
Part 6, Dancers at the Lake: The Walls ago
Part 6, Dancers at the Lake: Listen ago
Part 6, Dancers at the Lake: The Adma ago
Part 6, Dancers at the Lake: Iowa ago
Part 6, Dancers at the Lake: Sacred Bond ago
Part 6, Dancers at the Lake: LEGACY ago
Part 6, Dancers at the Lake: Signal ago
Part 6, Dancers at the Lake: Karzakh Sermon ago
Part 7, The Rest is Just Blood and Poetry: Document ago
Part 7, The Rest is Just Blood and Poetry: Carakhte ago
Part 7, The Rest is Just Blood and Poetry: Chains and Paths ago
Part 7, The Rest is Just Blood and Poetry: Khyber ago
Part 7, The Rest is Just Blood and Poetry: A bundle of contradictions ago
Part 7, The Rest is Just Blood and Poetry: Memories ago
Part 7, The Rest is Just Blood and Poetry: To have a garden ago
Part 7, The Rest is Just Blood and Poetry: Underground ago
Part 7, The Rest is Just Blood and Poetry: Treason ago
Part 8, A Single Ounce of Mercy: At the Dawn ago

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Buller
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This author knows how to sell a story, and that skill has clearly been refined when writing the first few chapters. While I might have some criticism against the ways that sound-effects are made, that comes closer to personal bias rather than anything else.

Prose is weird at points but not enough to hate it. Good enough to read casually at least. 4.5/5 from me

Rosriel
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There's only two chapters at the time of this review, so I can't say for sure where the characters or the plot is going. The world building is very cool, and I am intrigued. There are some parts where the prose switches from 'formal old English' to 'modern English' such as the sentence "Anyway, since those two weren’t born soldiers like himself". There are some punctuation in the dialogue such as "Plato gave a shallow nod and intoned:" should be a comma not a colon. Overall it's quite a nice read.