Reborn: Last Chance to Ascend

Reborn: Last Chance to Ascend

by LordM.

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Tiariel was born on earth, but not as a human. She had power and potential. However, no glory and adventure were waiting for her, only experiments and pain. When she finally escapes, she was being hunted down and eventually killed. There was no afterlife as she was instead sent to a different fantasy world by a mysterious being calling her his daughter. She got her second and last chance to use her potential to ascend and become something more.

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Not what I was looking for, but I think this has it's audience.

A simple, slightly edgy MC, from the start overpowered for her level, slaughtering her way through a unknown world.

That would be everything but since reviews have to be 50 words...
The language is all right, but there are some errors like the past tense of iregular verbs.