PRISON REALM

PRISON REALM

by de2jess

World decends to chaos by sudden appearance of various dark spatial cracks above their cities ,followed by sudden appearance of black tower . Cities overunned by terrefying monsters countless peope died.Men who were proud of their science and technology were given a direct slap on the face.

 a sound gave hope.

[ Assend to the INHERITENCE TOWER !]

[ RECEIVE YOUR INHERITENCE]

[ SAVE YOUR WORLD!!]

[ all your desires ..... will be fullfilled ]

[ I AM YOUR GOD ]

Adam from a middle class family , also starts his journey in the tower to change his destiny.Follow adam in his exciting journey filled with monsters ,demi humans,demons ,dragons ,elementals, angels & devils....

and many more................

****Story being edited.....****

****Will take time *****

*****sorry for inconvenience ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™****

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I'mnotbot
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Bhai hme abhi tk to sahi laga hai 

Aage ka nahin pata...Aise hi likhte rahoge to I'll support you Concept to badhia hai tmhara . Lagta hai kafi lamba likhne ka soch rahe ho issilye story dheere dheere badha rahe ho. Anyways likhte raho I'll support. Waise bhi bahut hi kam log ved puran ko leke kuch naya banate hai. But keep in mind ki koi offensive cheej na likh dena ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ƒ

 

Lallu
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Well there is only two chapters so not much to say.

Support you as you are writing about the city which I grew up.This is the first time I read fantasy apocalyptic setting in Banaras.So it's kinda new and I am eager to see where you will take the story.

Hope you won't disappoint me!

Wish you luck!!!!

 

Je Lulu
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Its good considering the plot is new and the place where story takes place is also new. The story is not like som clichรฉ fantasy novels were side characters are tooo too arrogant and the family members of the mc are dead and the mc had to take revenge.

Seen too much if these stuff in chinese novels so after getting something new i like it. I recommend you all . Its going to be good only as the time passes.

Sharga
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If i ignore the little bit of editing mistakes then this novel is good and with the increase in content it is becoming better.

I hope that the author keeps up the good work and do not degrade the content for anything. 

Chapter 5 was awesome and the best chaper till now.hope there will be more and more contents like that. Latest chapters are cool

Also like the new facts about indian mythology thingy. Its kinda cool โ˜บ๏ธ

New chapters are updated regularly so its good. 11th one is awesome

fbl
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I liked the story and the characters are relatable,i guess. Haha 

Story is progressing smoothly and like it at the point where shit got serious at chapter 5. I would have rated 4 stars only but the ultimately decided to support the author solely on chapter 5 content.

Loved the story untill now and hoping it to be good later too โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ. 

Urgh ..' the reviews must be atleast 200 words ' and how I'm supposed to extend it that long when the author released ony five chapters till now. Oh well I'll write it again lol..haha 

Points i liked 

Setup in India VARANASI

Characters name and behaviour

Typically teen characters 

No arrogant side characters

And atleast mc has a full family 

I hope that will stay till end๐Ÿคž๐Ÿคž 

Please don't make it typical fantasy novel 

Things that i Don't like- 

Little bit of technical thingy 

Grammar and editing (ya i know i sound like a geek but its not my fault ,its the system interface that is forcing me to write 200 worlds) 

 

I like your writing style,its refreshing and the last chapter (5 the one) caught me off gaurd. I didnt expect this kind of scene. Looks like i have to think highly of you. Waiting for the next content. 

 

 

 

Thanks

 

 

 

 

 

Gst
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Like the story but slow but awesome

Reviewed at: Chapter 9- Trial Lands!!

Story till now is good and gradually moving. I suppose the author is indian . It piqued my interest. From the synopsis of the story provided by the author there will be towers and dungeon . Looking forward to the indian author in these types of genre. It is my first time reading indian author on fantasy tower dungeon genre. And now is an orc!!! Haha