My Goddess Mother Gave Me A SYSTEM AND KICKED ME OUT

My Goddess Mother Gave Me A SYSTEM AND KICKED ME OUT

by Nii07

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Sexual Content

A disembodied soul wakes in a void with no memory of who they used to be but still had general knowledge of how they had lived on Earth. The soul is approached by a primordial goddess of chaos and is asked by the goddess whether they wish to join her family. Once they became kin with the goddess they were told to travel throughout multiple worlds and get stronger. Follow the story of Zero as he travel throughout familiar and unfamiliar worlds to gain strength.

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Table of Contents
202 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 0 Awakening ago
Chapter 1 Zero ago
Chapter 2 Chaos System ago
Chapter 3 Skill Creation ago
Chapter 4 Departure ago
Chapter 5 Cousin ago
Chapter 6 Preparation ago
Chapter 7 First Day of School ago
Chapter 8 Alucard ago
Chapter 9 Training ago
Chapter 10 Training Part 2 ago
Chapter 11 Training Complete ago
Chapter 12 Dhampir ago
Chapter 13 Investigation ago
Chapter 14 Soul Monarch ago
Chapter 15 Last Boss ago
Chapter 16 Early Final Battle ago
Chapter 17 Aftermath ago
Chapter 18 Dracula’s Castle ago
Chapter 19 The Battle Begins ago
Chapter 20 Chaotic Armory ago
Chapter 21 Desperation ago
Chapter 22 Desperation Conclusion ago
Chapter 23 The Journey Continues ago
Chapter 24 Unseen ago
Chapter 25 Death ago
Chapter 26 True Vampire ago
Chapter 27 True Vampire Part 2 ago
Chapter 28 Carmilla ago
Chapter 29 Carmilla Part 2 ago
Chapter 30 Return ago
Chapter 31 Genesis ago
Chapter 32 Devil’s Bargain ago
Chapter 33 Devil’s Bargain Part 2 ago
Chapter 34 Devil’s Bargain Part 3 ago
Chapter 35 Next Step ago
Chapter 36 Next Step Part 2 ago
Chapter 37 Execution ago
Chapter 38 Execution Part 2 ago
Chapter 39 Execution Part 3 ago
Chapter 40 Unknown ago
Chapter 41 Hidden ago
Chapter 42 Hidden Part 2 ago
Chapter 43 Hidden Part 3 ago
Chapter 44 Hidden Part 4 ago
Chapter 45 Birth ago
Skill Explanation ago
Chapter 46 Nova ago
Chapter 47 Death’s Embrace Part 1 ago
Chapter 48 Death’s Embrace Part 2 ago
Chapter 49 Death’s Embrace Part 3 ago
Chapter 50 Death’s Embrace Part 4 ago
Chapter 51 Death’s Embrace Part 5 ago
Chapter 52 Death’s Embrace Final ago
Chapter 53 Synergy ago
Chapter 54 Rebirth ago
Chapter 55 Surprise ago
Chapter 56 Priorities ago
Chapter 57 Reconciliation ago
Chapter 58 Carmilla and Death’s Resurrection ago
Chapter 59 Pantheon ago
Chapter 60 Domain of Death ago
Chapter 61 Domain of Death Conclusion ago
Chapter 62 Qliphoth ago
Chapter 63 Twilight Bridge ago
Chapter 64 Awakening ago
Chapter 65 Awakening Part 2 ago
Immortality ago
Chapter 66 Bargain ago
Chapter 67 Subjugate ago
Chapter 68 Subjugate Part 2 ago
Chapter 69 Subjugate Part 3 ago
Chapter 70 Subjugate Conclusion ago
Chapter 71 Mathias ago
Chapter 72 Mindscape ago
Chapter 73 Seizure ago
Chapter 74 Submission ago
Chapter 75 Archon ago
Chapter 76 Rescue Mission ago
Chapter 77 Rescue Mission Part 2 ago
Chapter 78 Rescue Mission Conclusion ago
Chapter 79 Sophia ago
Chapter 80 Sophia Part 2 ago
Chapter 81 Sophia Part 3 ago
Chapter 82 Sophia Part 4 ago
Chapter 83 Sophia Part 5 ago
Chapter 84 Sophia Part 6 ago
Chapter 85 Sophia Part 7 ago
Chapter 86 Sophia Part 8 ago
Chapter 87 Sophia Part 9 ago
Chapter 88 Sophia Part 10 ago
Chapter 89 Sophia Part 11 ago
Chapter 90 Sophia Part 12 ago
Chapter 91 Sophia Part 13 ago
Chapter 92 Sophia Part 14 ago
Chapter 93 Sophia Conclusion ago
Chapter 94 Renascence ago
Chapter 95 Renascence Part 2 ago
Chapter 96 Renascence Part 3 ago
Chapter 97 Renascence Part 4 ago
Chapter 98 Renascence Part 5 ago
Chapter 99 Renascence Part 6 ago
Chapter 100 Renascence Conclusion ago
Chapter 101 Development ago
Chapter 102 Pantheon Unlocked ago
Chapter 103 Farewell Nyx ago
Chapter 104 Farewell Yet Again Nyx ago
Chapter 105 Hiccup ago
Chapter 106 Mina ago
Chapter 107 Yaldabaoth Descends ago
Chapter 108 It Begins ago
Chapter 109 Zero’s Fall Part 1 ago
Chapter 110 Zero’s Fall Part 2 ago
Chapter 111 Zero’s Fall Part 3 ago
Chapter 112 Zero’s Fall Part 4 ago
Chapter 113 Zero’s Fall Part 5 ago
Chapter 114 Zero’s Fall Conclusion ago
Chapter 115 Sophia’s Rise ago
Chapter 116 Grief ago
Chapter 117 Resurrection ago
Chapter 118 Resurgence ago
Chapter 119 Back ago
Chapter 119.5 Weapons & Armor ago
Chapter 120 Forge ago
Chapter 121 Secret Boss Fight Part 1 ago
Chapter 122 Secret Boss Fight Part 2 ago
Chapter 123 Secret Boss Fight Part 3 ago
Chapter 124 Secret Boss Fight Part 4 ago
Chapter 125 Secret Boss Fight Part 5 ago
Side Story Primordial Council Part 1 ago
Side Story Primordial Council Conclusion ago
Chapter 126 Secret Boss Fight Part 6 ago
Chapter 127 Secret Boss Fight Part 7 ago
Chapter 128 Secret Boss Fight Part 8 ago
Chapter 129 Secret Boss Fight Part 9 ago
Chapter 130 Secret Boss Fight Conclusion ago
Chapter 131 Comatose ago
Chapter 132 Escape ago
Chapter 133 Respite ago
Chapter 134 Submission ago
Chapter 135 Punishment ago
Chapter 136 Proposition ago
Chapter 137 Trust ago
Chapter 138 Kingdom ago
Chapter 139 Genesis ago
Chapter 140 7th Lost Civilization ago
Chapter 141 Bracelet of Humanity ago
Chapter 142 2nd Semester Starts ago
Chapter 143 Nova’s 1st Day ago
Chapter 144 Nova’s 1st Day Conclusion ago
Chapter 145 Divine Egg ago
Chapter 146 Valna’s Emergence ago
Chapter 147 The Fallen ago
Chapter 148 The Fall Begins ago
Chapter 149 Incomplete Chaos Physiology Part 1 ago
Chapter 150 Incomplete Chaos Physiology Conclusion ago
Chapter 151 Dreamscape ago
Chapter 152 Awake ago
Chapter 153 Recap ago
Chapter 154 Recap Part 2 ago
Chapter 155 Recap Part 3 ago
Chapter 156 Recap Conclusion ago
Chapter 157 Aeon Soul ago
Chapter 158 Family Trip ago
Chapter 159 Lunar Awakening ago
Chapter 160 Lunar Awakening Part 2 ago
Chapter 161 Lunar Awakening Part 3 ago
Chapter 162 Lunar Awakening Part 4 ago
Chapter 163 Lunar Awakening Conclusion ago
Chapter 164 A Vampire Queen is Born ago
Chapter 165 Coven ago
Chapter 166 Coven Conclusion ago
Chapter 167 Chaos Form ago
Chapter 168 Family Drama ago
Chapter 169 The Empire Rises ago
Chapter 170 The Empire Rises Part 2 ago
Chapter 171 The Empire Rises Part 3 ago
Chapter 172 The Empire Rises Part 4 ago
Chapter 173 The Empire Rises Part 5 ago
Chapter 174 The Empire Rises Part 6 ago
Chapter 175 The Empire Rises Part 7 ago
Chapter 176 The Empire Rises Part 8 ago
Chapter 177 The Empire Rises Part 9 ago
Chapter 178 The Empire Rises Part 10 ago
Chapter 179 The Empire Rises Part 11 ago
Chapter 180 The Empire Rises Part 12 ago
Chapter 180.5 Side Story Divine Intervention ago
Chapter 181 The Empire Rises Conclusion ago
Chapter 182 The Sons of Loki ago
Chapter 183 Divine Emergence ago
Chapter 184 Greed ago
Chapter 185 Avarus ago
Chapter 186 Avarus Part 2 ago
Chapter 187 Avarus Part 3 ago
Chapter 188 Avarus Conclusion ago
Chapter 189 Rematch Zero vs Valna ago
Chapter 190 Rematch Zero vs Valna Part 2 ago
Chapter 191 Rematch Zero vs Valna Conclusion ago
Skill Explanation 2 ago
Chapter 192 Domain Construction ago
Chapter 193 Divine Combat Part 1 ago
Chapter 194 Divine Combat Part 2 ago

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Raggnoross
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good until it became wish fulfillment

Reviewed at: Chapter 44 Hidden Part 4

For the first 30 or so chapters I enjoyed it but soon after it started to show sings of the whole wish fulfillment thing. Gaining skills based around sex/sexuality/lust then he grabs some fairly random charater barely mentioned and turns her into a qarinah, think succubus but different I gues. then the sex scene on chapter 44, its not even a good one though even if it was I wouldn't give this a higher rating.

Personally? Not my thing, but considering the amount of these types of books on RR it may be yours.

deus vult
Overall

wish fullfillment author self inserts himself in the world of his favourite stories and video games and such. anyways, kid goes to dracula world and copies his powers, then goes on to ascend to become something like a god or something. the magic doesn't make much sense anymore, and everything is ridiculous on several levels, in terms of physics basically magic overrides it, and he eventually can do whatever magic and skills he wants as long as he eats enough souls. he can also create souls and stuff so he has overpowered people everywhere calling him master.... calling mc powerful is not enough to describe mc. it's more like mc starts treating reality like a toy, and enjoys breaking it on several levels. like a child who was given a screw driver and a copy machine from his mother, so he breaks everything apart and makes ridiculous things. except that he has no idea the consequences of breaking things apart, or even how anything works even after doing that, just that it looks cool, and he basically relies and the copy machine to make it all functional. things from mythology and magic only make sense because mc wants them to make sense. skills are accumilated really quickly and there is no rule to them. every world that exist in fiction exist in mc's multiverse. which means they are both real and not real at the same time, depending on which part of the multiverse you're walking on. more like dreamscape but with chaos ruling over everything. that's a quaint way to describe reality.

the skills have nothing to do with anything anymore. everything becomes just a battle of wills at that point. like the mental fight they have towards the end, where they rely on their imagination to do anything and that's inside someone's mind. time magic? mc unlocks that by chapter 30. soul magic? sorry, already mastered. the divine tree iggdrasil is copied to become his daugther or something in a gacha like game mechanic where he just merges a bunch of souls together. yeah. but it's fine. I kinda like it. the system and skill acquiring feels like that time I got reincarnated as a slime wn, but towards the end, where after the second half everything becomes kinda ridiculous but still charming, with ridiculous plotline and absurd power and skills being acquired everywhere.

rimiru and gang grow strong to the point it's more of a joke to defy them if anything. like, hilariously funny. but not the ln where he becomes a more subdued business man and they changed the plotline to make him look more 'polite'. he spared that king guy, so that destroying an army thousands of humans suddenly doesn't look evil, and changes his personality towards the monster side, basically throwing his character development to the trash can because they want to make him look weak to make him more likeable to a wider audiance or something. anyways, that's the plot. I kinda like it so a 4, but it's really bad so no way that's a five.

goatheliX
Overall

To put it simply this novel is like junk food; its bad and quick but you still come back for more. It becomes a power fantasy after a little while with skills becoming damn near useless making every fight into a dbz slog of will.

 

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