Galactic Fist of Legend

by Scottf14

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Comedy Sci-fi GameLit Harem High Fantasy LitRPG Male Lead Martial Arts Portal Fantasy / Isekai Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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In the year 2018 a bright star appeared near Earth. Humanity as a whole was briefly introduced to a race of beings far beyond their understanding. During that brief interaction a proclamation was made, Defeat the Grand Emissary or become the eternal slaves of those who had arrived at Earth.

The only chance for victory was for people all across the globe to make a choice. When prompted to become a champion and a play a bizarre game of life or death they could choose yes or no. Those who chose no, went about their lives afterward. All memory of the event was lost despite the fact that their very existence as a free species hung by a single thread.

Will those who said yes manage to survive the horror of the game and become strong enough to defeat the Grand Emissary. Can one of them become... The Galactic Fist of Legend.

Also, it's a comedy. Pretty obvious, right?

Notes: This story will contain graphic violence, stupid humor, nudity, sexiness, and maybe I'll give the main character a pet cat or something. I don't know yet. Still, you need to be pretty mature to properly take care of a pet.

Notes2: This story is my answer to stories such as Gantz, Terror Infinity, Battle Royale, Btoom!, and strangely enough... Captain N: The Video Game Master. It is an original story, but it does seek to give a similar vibe to some of those tales of legend. However, it is not meant to be an overly serious tale as I have decided that the new stories that I release in the coming year will be mostly comedies.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: Born to be Wild ago
Chapter 2: Dead Man Walking ago
Chapter 3: Unlimited ago
Chapter 4: Get Some, Big Sexy ago
Chapter 5: Bounty Star ago
Chapter 6: Companions ago
Chapter 7: Congratulations Mortal ago
Chapter 8: Protection From Evil ago
Chapter 9: Go Team Devil ago
Chapter 10: Don't Leave Me Wiggle! ago
Chapter 11: Soldiers of the Shroom ago
Chapter 12: Talk to Me ago
Chapter 13: Get Hard ago
Chapter 14: Prepare for Total Domination ago
Chapter 15.1: Game On! ago
Chapter 15.2: Game On! ago
Chapter 16: Kitty, I'm Going Home ago
Chapter 17: Return of the Legend ago
Chapter 18: You Fiend! ago
Chapter 19.1: Catfight ago
Chapter 19.2: Catfight ago
Chapter 19.3: Catfight ago
Chapter 20: Hunger of the Lost ago
Chapter 21: Oh, How Comfy ago
Chapter 22: The Flame that Burns, Eternal ago
Chapter 23: Tell Me Your Secrets ago
Chapter 24: Friends From the North? ago
Chapter 25: Praise It! ago
Chapter 26: L-Lewd ago
Chapter 27: Ferakai, Ferakai Z ago
Chapter 28: Welcome Back ago
Chapter 29: Take Them Off! ago
Chapter 30: Let's Foursome! ago
chapter 31: Preparation and Innovation ago
Chapter 32: Trial Run ago
Chapter 33: Battle Tactics ago
Chapter 34: Friendship Rose ago
Chapter 35: The Power of Friendship ago
Chapter 36: Preparation Overpower ago
Chapter 37.1: Rescue Me ... and an Update Regarding the Just Released Volume 1 ago
Chapter 37.2: Rescue Me ago
Chapter 38: Hurry up and Wait ago
Chapter 39: Phone a Friend ago
Chapter 40: Above it All ago
Chapter 41: Have a Cookie, Buddy ago
Chapter 42.1: Prelude to Infinite Sorrow ago
Chapter 42.2: Prelude to Infinite Sorrow ago
Chapter 43: Epic Battle of the Bridge...? ago
Chapter 44: Punitive Measures ago
Chapter 45.1: The First Revelation ago
Chapter 45.2: The First Revelation ago
Chapter 46.1: The Name of Your Destruction ago
Chapter 46.2: The Name of Your Destruction ago
Chapter 46.3: The Name of Your Destruction ago
Chapter 47.1: Rampage ago
Chapter 47.2: Rampage ago
Chapter 47.3: Rampage ago
Chapter 47.4: Rampage ago
End volume III - Chapter 48.1: Rewards of the Victor ago
End volume III - Chapter 48.2: Rewards of the Victor ago
End volume III - Chapter 48.3: Rewards of the Victor ago
Volume 4 Start- Chapter 49.1 ago
Volume 4 Start- Chapter 49.2 ago
Volume 4 Start- Chapter 49.3 ago
Chapter 50.1: ago
Chapter 50.2: ago
Chapter 50.3 ago
Chapter 51.1: Life Werx ago
Chapter 51.2: Life Werx ago
Chapter 51.3: Life Werx ago
Chapter 51.4: Life Werx ago
Chapter 51.5: Life Werx ago
Chapter 52.1: Somewhat Silent Protagonist ago
Chapter 52.2: Somewhat Silent Protagonist ago
Chapter 52.3: Somewhat Silent Protagonist ago
Chapter 52.4: Somewhat Silent Protagonist ago
Chapter 52.5: Somewhat Silent Protagonist ago
Chapter 53.1 Underworld Entrance ago
Chapter 53.2 Underworld Entrance ago
Chapter 53.3 Underworld Entrance ago
Chapter 53.4 Underworld Entrance ago
Chapter 54.1: Mercenary of Love ago
Chapter 54.2: Mercenary of Love ago
Chapter 54.3: Mercenary of Love ago
Chapter 54.4: Mercenary of Love ago
Chapter 54.5: Mercenary of Love ago
Chapter 55.1: Luau' Ra ago
Chapter 55.2: Luau' Ra ago
Chapter 55.3: Luau' Ra ago
Chapter 55.4: Luau' Ra ago
Chapter 55.5: Luau' Ra ago
Chapter 56.1: Gifts From the Past ago
Chapter 56.2: Gifts From the Past ago
Chapter 56.3: Gifts From the Past ago
Chapter 56.4: Gifts From the Past ago
Chapter 56.5: Gifts From the Past ago
Chapter 57.1: Helm of the Protagonist ago
Chapter 57.2: Helm of the Protagonist ago
Chapter 57.3: Helm of the Protagonist ago
Chapter 58: Volume 4 Epilogue ago
Chapter 59.1: Adventures in Princess Sitting ago
Chapter 59.2: Adventures in Princess Sitting ago
Chapter 59.3: Adventures in Princess Sitting ago
Chapter 59.4: Adventures in Princess Sitting ago
Chapter 59.5: Adventures in Princess Sitting ago
Chapter 59.6: Adventures in Princess Sitting ago
Chapter 59.7: Adventures in Princess Sitting ago
Chapter 60.1: Return to Imperial Garden ago
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Seraphu
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Spoiler: Spoiler

 

There are three fundamental rules of reality

 

1. Matter and energy cannot be created or destroyed

2. All objects with a mass have a gravitational pull

3. Scott's stories inevitably devolve into harem wish fulfillment.

 

 

like his other stories, the galactic fist of legend start out with some world shattering event that changes the protagonists (who is always named Scott, presumably for the author to easier project himself onto) life. It starts out very well, with Scott struggling to stay alive in whatever dangerous world he has found himself in. This continues until he meets the first haremmember, however.

there will always be atleast two girls, and they usually conform to some form of steriotype. The members of Scott's group are always all girls, and they will be the only other major characters we see. I have read most of Scott's stories (although I've never been able to force myself to finish one) and have yet to se a male character in the protagonists group. Character interaction mostly revolves around the girls tripping over each other trying to gain his favor, and him trying to avoid any and all sexual interaction.

 

In short, if you are above fourteen and like plot in your stories, this is not for you. Scott appeals to a younger teen audience with his style of writing, and those groups are thus who will find enjoyment in his stories.

kurothesaky
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Harem. Scott's greatest enemy

After many many many works, can you at least try and fix out this harem, i'm not saying that you should keep doing harems but for the love of god, does it need to be in the same format every single time? I thought that you pondered over other reviews complaing about your harem obsession.

Let me have a decent read for once without 12yo hormones slaughering their way into the novel

danielsmith217
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Was really hoping this would be the one

Like all of his stories it starts out amazing. Then the harem starts, to be far this one seemed to last longer than most, and the plot starts to fall to the wayside. This one so far has been my favorite of his stories, hopefully he won't fall into the same trap like all his other ones.  

F.Dj
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DAMN YOU,,, LAUGHING ASS!!!

Holy motherflippin sonofagun, you made my ass laugh out loud,,, and I mean it literally. It was like pffttt and burrpp and then tit tiieets it was helluva disgrace to my dignity. You gonna pay for it, I'm gonna made you eat this poisonous cookies so you wouldn't be able to stop writing this shit for all eternity. Let my curse dung you the taste of laughing your ass literally!!! 

 

Okay I think this nonsense praises is enough, let me back to my laughing ass and provide me with my daily insanity dose please :-) 

jburge1
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Strong start, and then gets monotonous

Really liked it at the start, but then it just became one mission after another and became monotonous.  This author always does this.  He either solely focuses on game structure or character development, but for some reason can't do both at the same time.  He needs to find a balance.

Justaway
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once again another amazing story written by a great author. It's weird that there's stull so little people that read it but hopefully that will change in the near future. 

 

It's a great game-like story where getting experience can literally save your day. Fighting to te death with whatever and wherever you can possibly think of. I reccommend it to all

sr1030nx
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Haven't had a laugh like this in a while.

I would hate to be stuck in a Mario world, although you'd think they would say something about having multiple life's.

Flavar
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harem makes a otherwise great story worse.

the story was fun to read, especially after i decided to simple skip the total unnecesary harem parts- It would be so much greater without them an easy 4 or even 4,5 stars

SLit23
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Now here’s a tragedy if I’ve ever seen one. The story starts off well, great even! The character is believable, there’s steady growth as the world around him is revealed, and he meets a few interesting characters along the way. Sadly, it degenerates into a nonsensical harem drama around the half way mark. Don’t get me wrong, I don’t mind a little smut in the stories, but there are times when entire chapters are nothing but filler serving to show you just how much his harem wants to fuck him. Characters that once had personality are turned into empty headed bimbos, and the entire story derails. This was honestly turning out to be one of my favorites, and I’m sad to see it go so far downhill. :/

kao
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Scotty's Mother of a story has it going ON!

Love this book. Will now go buy it.

 

First. Contrary to that harem tag, my review is based up to 45.1 and um. There was ONLY at most 4 paragraphs that gave into the NC17 of harem. That's it. So don't let that hold you back.

 

His MC's relationship is pretty adultlike, mature and sensible. NONE of that teen angsts, 'k-k-kiss??' moments from anime. I've watched hundreds of harem anime and this isn't much like it. 

I gave it a 4.5 star  for grammar cuz a VERY FEW times I've seen mistakes. (sorry scott, i didn't take time to write them down for you. too caught up in your story to stop! gomenesai) 

 

Overall, a well written story. Good literary device of alternative game settings to allow the character to be challenged and also allows for greater diversity in settings. 

 

Good Job! (Thums and Grin approved by Gai Sensei)