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Max, an average IT worker, suddenly finds himself in a new and dangerous world. From talking with gods, to making deals with ancient monsters, Max's new life is anything but ordinary. Follow Max in his quest to go home. Along the way, he will learn magic, save lives, and end some also.
Deepest Depths is an action adventure litRPG portal fantasy.
This is my first time at writen anything. Please be constructive in any advice you may have. Thank you for reading.
Some chapters will get dark. They will be marked with a warning.
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If you are looking for a lighthearted isekai, then this be that!
Now to go a bit deeper:
There is a lot wrong with this story, there are a lot of spelling mistakes, gramatical errors, confusiong PoV changes, fast paced to the point of nonexistant detail, one dimensional side characters, main character handed over powered skills left right and center.
However what it does get right in spades is that at its heart, it's an adventure in a magical realm with history and lore galore. Furthermore it is going to a destination signposted by it's title yet still unkown. The most important part is that I bloody well want to find out!
With some revision and serious editing this could be the story of a lifetime!
Three and a half stars will amend later if edited.
Amazing story. I personally love it. If the author has a petreon account I would paid to read more. Once I started reading it I could not stop. Please write more can't wait for more chapters. The world is engaging and the system and classes are fun. The MC is kinda OP but not to the point were the story becomes silly. Thank you