Jason a 13-year-old boy who is a fellow Otaku was brought to another world. He discovers that he was reincarnated with a gacha system of good and evil. Using this he plans on getting revenge on the people who bullied the owner of the body he was reincarnated in, after he discovers a strange connection between him and the deceased soul.

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KYRobin
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Good but needs a lot of work

Reviewed at: Sorting Things Out PT-3

First off, Im all for reincarnation novels just to be clear. 🤗

But this story needs a lot of work.

I sometimes feel like the paragraphs are either too disjointed and seperate from each other or it's too much dump in the brain that I'm still racking by mind on what I'm reading.

Don't get me wrong, the story is good.

The building is there, the concept is there.

It follows the usual reincarnation type of story route and that's good, it's doing a good job of that.

It's not too typical, thank god.

Overall its good and im expecting more.

Keep it up, author! 😁😁😁🤗🤗🤗