One Step At A Time

One Step At A Time

by coinhas2sides

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

Fire. The start and end of civilation.  

We look at the life of Benjen Crocker, a man out of time and space, forced to struggle in a world not his own. Will he be the spark that starts a new life, the timber that continues what survived, or will he suffocate what little remains. 

This story is based on Fallout New Vegas and follows someone who is transported from our world to the Fallout universe. They will have knowledge of previous games but not New Vegas so they can understand the situation quickly but not be able to exploit the game knowledge.

MC will have some special skills given from the start, but should hopefully not be overpowered and no levelling system. 

It has been a while since i played the game and this novel was mostly inspired by reading others novels. I am getting most of my facts from Wikipedia and some details will be tweaked, changed or added to make the world more developed and to allow some of the plot points. 

Interesting facts, spelling corrections and ideas for future and past events are encouraged, criticism is welcome provided it is constructive or provides alternative solutions. I will do my best to make corrections or to answer any queries without spoiling the story. 

Image from here

https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Great_Sand_Dunes_National_Park_and_Preserve,_United_States_(Unsplash_xa8gMCUssPc).jpg 

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KYRobin
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I started reading this and thought it was a system novel, and that was when I was surprised after finishing the chapter knowing that this was game fallout fan fiction. 😮

I should have read the explanation, but don't worry too much and the chapter is still good. The author seemed to write this fan fiction, which is familiar with the mechanics and systems of the series.

The writing part is a little full. Perhaps the author can extend it to make it easier to read, but that doesn't matter to me. It doesn't stop the fun of the story so far. I read this chapter again and imagined it as a video game sequence of the game, and for some reason it works. This may be great fan fiction.

Again, I never thought it was fan fiction. Hopefully the author will tell a good story from the fan fiction of this video game.

Keep it up, author! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤩🤩🤩🤩