Gabriel wakes up as a baby in a fantasy world with all the perks and stats of his character from a game he used to play, how did he end up there?!! And what will he do from there on?!!
Hi!! I finally decided to write my own novel!! I hope you all will enjoy it!!
If you are into OP characters who likes to chill and have a peaceful life while crushing demon lords and destroying armies then you just found what you needed sir!! Please take in consideration that English isn't my first language but feel free to give me you feedback!!
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English is not my first language either but that do not matter if I can understand it . I like the writing style I can't tell whats the story about other than reading the description and awaiting the next chapters. But what I read, I like it. So you got me interested seeing forward to your next chapter.
Up to chapter Chapter 5 review.
The story idea looks to be fun. I'm glad that there aren't gaint skill descriptions this early into the story.
If the author can learn to edit and fix the small grammar errors, the story could a slightly better read.
Overal a nice start and I look forward to were the story goes.