CALL OF THE DAO

CALL OF THE DAO

by Senior_elder

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Sexual Content

This is a story of a young boy, Lin Feng, whose passion for cultivation dies once he opens his meridians, he decides to leave his family and settle on a small Mountain, to kill his boredom, he starts painting, carving, farming and other hobbies. What he doesn't know is the things he thinks are normal can make cultivators lose their minds.

Join Lin Feng in his daily normal life. 




The cover isn't mine, just found it on google. If the artist wants it removed just dm me and I will remove it. 

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Volker Huetter
Overall

Slice of live comedy

Reviewed at: Chapter 15

This story is about a clueless op protagonist going about his daily life while his surroundings react to his powers he is unaware of. It's quite a funny read, though don't take this story seriously.

Disclaimer: the grammar and word use are not good, though it doesn't hinder me from enjoying the story. Also, the author is a new one and is trying to improve.

Thor Aegir
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A badly done narration

Reviewed at: Chapter 9

The author of this novel try to give a mysterious vibe to his mc. All he achieve is to be overly precise on some details and overly blurry on the mc character and actions.

The story could be better with a more character centric view and with more emotions on the mc part. Fear, loneliness, incomprehension, anger,etc.

Not bad but could be better.

Demiurge
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This story is a nice one to read while relaxing. There is a fair bit of OP MC slice of life. As is usual for such stories, the MC is oblivious to common sense. The style flows quite well and the story is well written. An overall pleasant story.