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It is the year 2199, the end of the 22nd century. Due to a biopocalypse unleashed by a certain genetic engineer, all life on the planet evolved at incredible speeds, but humans couldn't keep up so they built walled cities. The story follows a certain clone trying to find its place.
The first 90ish chapters aren't those that I am proud of, but if you like the premise, stick around, it gets better in the 100s.
Five chapters per week Mon-Fri
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I can't say much on the story itself, as its style makes it hard for me to get into, but it's not bad, contrary to what the other review or the rating suggests.
It's just very minimalistic and unique.
I think some pesgraphs need to be fused together to allow for better flow, but otherwise it's very clear who's doing what (or talking) and what things look like.
In the wider Royal Road context this is not too dissimilar from some popular LitRPG's, style wise.
So give this story a shot, I think it deserves it !
Look, I will try to be kind, but it's already a disaster when every sentence is followed by a paragraph break. Just open a book and compare. There is no flow or structure to build upon.
Stay away from that fiction, the author has no appreciation to the written word.