Rise of the Realm (Dungeon Core)

by bookwyrm02

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

Dungeons are probably amongst the strangest creatures in the world, creating vast labyrinths and wonders to explore. This is the story of one such dungeon as he makes his first shaky steps into the world, and all of the horror and majesty he will bring in to the world. 

(This is my first fiction and I would appreciate any constructive criticism)

Note: Litrpg elements start around chapter nine, and the story is a little slow at first. 

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