The Prophet's Chosen

by Ragnaroik

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Living on her sister's couch, delivering pizza, life was not the most eventful for Mallory. It wasn't until she was playing her favorite RPG that a mysterious message appears offering her a purpose and a different life. Transported to the world of Esari, Mallory must learn the system, fight monsters, make friends, and come to truly understand what she's been asked to do. 

Banished from Hell, Roark has to start all over at level 1. Most people aren't a fan of demons, especially not ones without a leash. Making a deal with the Adventurer's Guild to save himself while gaining enough power to work on his revenge, Roark must first survive training camp. 

Esari is a world full of danger, with violence an everyday part of life. What does it take to grow stronger and survive? Is the power worth the price? 

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I ship Roark and Malora and I really enjoy the personalities of each character and how descriptive the author is. The world is unique and feels like a fun D&D campaign. I can't wait to find out what happens to the characters. There is a lot to uncover in each chapter.