Original HIATUS Drama Romance Female Lead
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Jasmine "Jazz"  Henry was just your average girl. She could easily get lost in any book, had a supportive group of friends, a love for baseball and football, and had only ever loved one boy.

Jonah McCarthy was just your average guy. There wasn't anything special about him. He hung out with almost the same group of friends. He wasn't the most popular or cutest in school by any means but to Jazz, he was perfect.

Jazz definitely wasn't the most popular or prettiest girl in school either. She was always the bigger girl. She knew that Jonah nor any other boy looked at her twice. That all changed when they went off to college though. Jazz lost the weight and Jonah finally noticed her. But will he be anything like Jazz has dreamed about all these years or did she just have him up on a pedestal?

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RoseBalor

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