An Outside View

by Panjason

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Humanity has all but decimated the former tyrants of the skies and could finally explore the various other Orbs of the atmosroi of Seidonas. The sudden change in opportunity was, however, not without flaws and perils. Most of all, the most dangerous dragon may had yet to rise.

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