Fate's Fool: A LitRPG

by Vluxy

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Naked, confused, and in debt to a god, Ash finds himself teleported to a new world. He has to make his way through the challenges of monsters, politics, and the unwanted attentions of those more powerful than him. Even worse? The god has made a quite literal fool of him. 

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Ngrundhofer
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Tried it on a whim and was engrossed after the first paragraph. So far very well thought out. The main character is just the right mix of thoughtful and snarky unlike many that substitute snark for personality. Though it is a young story it has plenty of promise. Looking forward to more in the future.