To live is to Dream (LitRPG; First Draft)

To live is to Dream (LitRPG; First Draft)

by Akten Dreams

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

A new Power has come into the World and seeks to change it.

Being on the last dregs of sanity and full of alcohol Daniel West receives an opportunity to seek revenge.

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To live is to Dream is the second book of the Just a Dream series. You do not have to read the first to enjoy the second, but there will be recurring characters along the line.

The first book features Mir, a man that dislikes how his current world appears and hence wants to change it.

The second book will feature other people and how the changes implemented by Mir affect their lives.

For those interested in my first book, it's easy to find it. Just beware that with the first book, it was my first time writing and there are a lot of grammar errors despite lots of editing, at least at the beginning of the book.

The cover was done by Lmarief. I had requested something bizarre and she delivered. I have even used it as part of the story since her interpretation of my imagination was a bit different. Still, I loved it. As a thank you gift, I posted a link to her profile here for others who want a unique cover. https://www.royalroad.com/profile/220043

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Lord Sputnik
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I had a very hard time with this one.  I feel like the author has a grand idea in their head, but they can't get it out.  It lacks style, setting, and the characters are flat.  If this is their first novel, it is a good start.  I'm sure they will learn how to improve as time goes by and if they keep writing.  I'm a little disappointed that we haven't seen a new chapter in almost a year.

At this point, I wouldn't recommend even attempting a Patreon until you get more chapters and followers, or at least don't paywall anything yet.  I personally find it off-putting to see a Patreon link without much content to go with it.  Still, that is just my opinion.