Lich God Deidre

by JAGuppy

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Twenty-five-year-old office worker, Deidre, is killed after getting T-boned from a drunk driver. She gets dragged away from the normal afterlife by an unknown force and is instead reincarnated as the Lich God.

Deidre, dying with lots of regrets, now tries to live her new life by fulfilling all the things she didn’t get a chance to do previously. However, as the Demon King, Fyren’s plot is revealed bit by bit, she learns that the nice life she tries hard to get used to might not last forever.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 01 – I’m a Fancy Skeleton ago
Chapter 02 – Lich God Castle ago
Chapter 03 – Solina the Warrior ago
Chapter 04 – Skeletal Savior ago
Chapter 05 – Adventurer’s Association ago
Chapter 06 – Let’s Steal Some Corpses ago
Chapter 07 – Can I Have Your Body? ago
Chapter 08 – Fight Me, Bro ago
Chapter 09 – Kill the Kobolds ago
Chapter 10 – Tina Thirsty ago
Chapter 11 – Swenrai Village ago
Chapter 12 – Demon Guile ago
Chapter 13 – The Dark Art ago
Chapter 14 – Queen of Reuland ago
Chapter 15 – Succubus Queen ago
Chapter 16 – Compact Mana ago
Chapter 17 – Welcome to the Lich God Castle ago
Chapter 18 – Sneaky Demon ago
Chapter 19 – Demon Secrets ago
Chapter 20 – Ice Goddess ago
Chapter 21 – Journey with the Queen ago
Chapter 22 – Lilith Darkviper ago
Chapter 23 – Demon King Nightmare ago
Chapter 24 – Dungeon Party ago
Chapter 25 – First Hunt ago
Chapter 26 – Everlasting Light ago
Chapter 27 – Party-Bonding Exercises ago
Chapter 28 – Vampire Siblings ago
Chapter 29 – Disbanding ago
Chapter 30 – Trinity of Torment ago
Chapter 31 – Curious Little Shop ago
Chapter 32 – Niran the Primeval ago
Chapter 33 – Stage One: The Dunes ago
Chapter 34 – Stage One: Venomknight ago
Chapter 35 – Einar the Unbreakable ago
Chapter 36 – Stage Two: Frozen Fjord ago
Chapter 37 – Stage Two: Heart of Ice ago
Chapter 38 – Stage Three: Skykeep ago
Chapter 39 – Stage Three: A Wish ago
Chapter 40 – Unbreakable Bonds ago
Chapter 41 – Forgiveness ago
Chapter 42 – The Goofball ago
Chapter 43 – Altered Path ago
Chapter 44 – Primeval Wisdom ago
Chapter 45 – A Step Too Far ago
Chapter 46 – Defanged ago
Chapter 47 – Heart ago
Chapter 48 – Cauterized Conviction ago
Chapter 49 – The Lich’s Court ago
Chapter 50 – Deaf Ears ago
Chapter 51 – Farms ago
Chapter 52 – Cover Blown ago
Chapter 53 – Fear Me ago
Chapter 54 – Pyralis Hellfire ago
Chapter 55 – Blood Demon ago
Chapter 56 – Free ago
Chapter 57 – Ivora Threat ago
Chapter 58 – Decisions, Decisions ago
Chapter 59 – Demon King’s Abode ago
Chapter 60 – Fate of a Demon ago
Chapter 61 – Threads of Accord ago
Chapter 62 – The Underworld ago
Chapter 63 – Ask Nicely ago

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PhoenixFlare
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On the whole, it's alright, but there's a distinct lack of detail. The grammar is largely good, but there seems to be no real emotional descriptions or elaboration on anything. It's very 'I did this and then I did that, and then X did Y' in terms of writing. There's little flavor and not a whole of lot natural worldbuilding.

If I can, I would recommend that the writer refrain from trying to frame everything in a 'I did this' method. Try explaining events with a bit more flair, use more metaphor and simile, perhaps some exaggerated comparisons. Take more than a sentence to describe an event or a person in order to let the readers gain more insight. It's got some good potential, it's just very dry so far.